Reviews for Kings Never Die |
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dude2865 chapter 3 . 7/19 Damn this wasn’t finished |
Call me Ryder-0001 chapter 3 . 6/21 Why do you always start interesting stories then straight up abandon them? Huh!? Are you teasing us? Are YOU!? We league of assassins are giving you an ultimatum. Continue with the story or Damian will pay you a visit to test whether he would kill an unarmed civilian. Your choice. |
sloksingh45 chapter 3 . 5/27 Please update |
sloksingh45 chapter 2 . 5/27 Please update soon |
sloksingh45 chapter 1 . 5/27 I like it please continue |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/16 Do you think you could edit the first paragraph of this chapter? It's 29 lines long. I don't know about you, but a paragraph starts being considered too long if it's over seven lines. Greeting new readers with such a monstrous block of text is really intimidating and will not make people want to read. If you could split it into multiple paragraphs, that would be best. |
quarttzblade12 chapter 3 . 5/9 I pray for more |
Guest chapter 3 . 4/16 Please update |
CM200415 chapter 3 . 2/7 Update |
CM200415 chapter 1 . 10/26/2019 Updateee soonn!? |
theawsomest5 chapter 3 . 10/9/2019 First of all awesome chapter and to answer your question at the end I feel Master Chief would win not by much yes but still win. |
BadReader chapter 3 . 9/25/2019 This was good. Could have worked as just a Damien story though. Not sure why there was even a self insert at all. Entertaining either way. |
apocs chapter 1 . 9/24/2019 update? |
ProjectZion chapter 3 . 8/28/2019 Really well written, absolutely love the premise as well. Can't wait to see where you take the story. |
Malphas72511 chapter 3 . 8/17/2019 I love this please update soon and I hope you pair him with batgirl |