| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Cloud with the Silver Lining |
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  Stephen chapter 5 . 3/24 What Happened After That And Please Update The Story Soon I Really Like The Story. |
| guest chapter 5 . 1/17 i think I detect the influence of Pheonix Dawn's "Effects and Side Effects" in your story, and eagerly await your forthcoming chapters to see how you have Harry/Jaz deal with the fallout of his/her gender change. More please. |
| Stephen chapter 5 . 12/12/2019 What Happened After That And Please Update The Story Soon. |
| Stephen chapter 5 . 11/25/2019 What happened after that and please update the story soon. |
 tammgrogan chapter 5 . 9/25/2019 Hello I am REALLY enjoying your Wonderful story, and will be looking forward to your next update. Until then Thank you for sharing it with all of us, and take care. |
| kgfinkel chapter 1 . 9/18/2019 You need to either slow down and think about how you're writing, get a reputable beta to proofread before posting or pick up a spelling and grammar textbook. Poppy's last name is spelled 'Pomfrey.' Kingsley's first name is misspelled. His shortened last name is misspelled. You used 'hormone' instead of Hermione when Harry first gains consciousness. |
| digbygreen chapter 5 . 9/12/2019 Many fanfics also have purebloods able to "claim" half-bloods and muggle-borns. That would then permit Draco to control the Potter fortune as well. |
| salyl-jarlyjraneol chapter 5 . 8/19/2019 How esperando con ansias el proximo capítulo. Éxitos. |
| N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 5 . 8/15/2019 Jasmine is a good name too. I'd have chosen a different middle name, but that's just me. I look forward to more, keep it up! :D |
| N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 4 . 8/14/2019 Iris Potter. No idea for a middle name. |
| amyrlinengineer chapter 5 . 8/12/2019 This story is sweet so far. I look forward to seeing how the girls friendship develops further. Thank you for sharing! |
| starlite22 chapter 5 . 8/7/2019 It’s been a while I hope you continue this. One thing those if his chromosome was changing not his DNA why did his hair colour and features change? If it was only meant to change gender? |
| hbmt chapter 1 . 7/23/2019 I like thid story so far. It would be nice for it to be continued! To the guest comment from 01.07.2019: If everything goes according to canon, then why fanfiction? Read the books and be done with it! To the guest comment from 16.06.2019: I hope that you NEVER come into any kind if political power! |
| hbmt chapter 1 . 7/23/2019 I like this story so would be nice, if you continued it. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/21/2019 This amazing I can't wait to read more |
