These were really good. I’m not all that interested in Resident Evil, I just think Nemesis is a badass. As a Dark writer I really loved the previous chapter. The brutality of JNPR’s deaths really vibed with me. The only real complaint I have is that you used “But he/she was wrong” quite excessively. Other than that, they were pretty well written other than the occasional grammar error. I hope you continue to write more of this, as RWBY is seriously low on decent Dark fics.

Mr. X's first form is god damn invincible but its slow, his second for has little defense but is faster and stronger and regens still and a rocket launcher was needed to kill him, I find the fact that you did the first form correctly absolutely amazing

Pyrrha becomes the Final Girl.

Great chapter keep up the good work. Imagine Pyrrha having to fight both Nemesis and Mr. X for her bad ending.

You should have them do a let's play for the entire game!

Play jt music's Mr X rap "ready or not" while reading chapter 1

i wont say this but its too tempting.
X gonna give it to ya!

Mr X gave it to them.

Well that's a bummer, as good as this part was I think someone should make a 'Let's play.' story of RWBY playing the full game...well maybe Ruby or Yang playing with Weiss and Blake just watching.

Brutal, but a good one-shot story. Maybe a crossover story should be made, without the Game-Over for the main cast, featuring Mr. X in the story.

This one shot is really good at highlighting just how dumb RWBY characters are as combatants and teachers, in particular Yang. They just charge in and brute force it, since that's "all you need" in a fight against Grimm (even though strategy is still key). They know their worst enemies are humanoid and intelligent, but they don't really teach their students to know how to fight that. Qrow, in particular, had years teaching Ruby, and wanted to just isolate her into her innocent world when he knew she had silver eyes and was going to be a huntress. Blake worked for the White Fang, so you would think she'd have experience, but she comes in like a greenhorn. Most of them do, actually.

Shame you won't continue this. I really did want to see them react to the rest of RE2.

I heard they're already remaking the 3rd one. If they ask us what else we want them to remake, for me it will be Code Veronica, RE4 with better graphics and put back in things they took out, and maybe a console version of Resident Evil Gaiden.

please do Hunk version he guy is a survivor took bites, vomiting poison and Mr. X punches (in the Survivor mode) dude can take it all and still make it out alive (even though he almost died to all of them)

...Jesus... Y'know, this was a horrific oneshot that portrayed Mr. X, complete with him being the unstoppable terminator-esq juggernaut he was shown to be in the 'Unstoppable Tyrant' trailer brutally murdering Team RWBY and Oobleck, but... I can't deny that ending scene with it and Neo was kinda cute too ._.