Reviews for The Boy in the Backyard
midnitereader chapter 28 . 8/19
Alice had some nerve. She tried her mother's patience, her husband's and now her sister-in-law's. And none of them wanted anything to do with her. Her callousness caused great harm, almost the death of Edward and Charlotte, all because of her selfishness. Alice got what she deserved, lots of time to think of the wrong she had done. I don't think she even cared. Jasper got past it and lived his life until he met the woman he fill in love with and a family of his own. Edward survived and got a wife and a new daughter, a family that he loves very much.
midnitereader chapter 27 . 8/19
Peter's life had changed from the first time Charlotte found him in her playhouse. He found a friend and her mother who took him in, along with that lion that gave him strength and courage. And then when he found his Uncle Edward his life became so much better. His father, Garrett, knew he could have a better life with his uncle. It's too bad his mother, Kate in all her drugged induced delusion, didn't see that. Maybe under all of that haze she still loved her little boy but he couldn't return to that life that hurt him so bad. Now he has a new start with people that love him so much.
midnitereader chapter 26 . 8/18
Peter will live with the vision of what happened in front of him for a long time. I hope they took Kate away. Peter made sure she couldn't run.
midnitereader chapter 25 . 8/18
I hope Kate is so much in shock that she doesn't run. It way have been an accident but it was still manslaughter, I think. What a day for Bella's party. And why would Alice give Kate their addresses?
midnitereader chapter 24 . 8/18
Peter is not adjusting well. He's gone through a lot of changes and some of these new things make him uncomfortable. Edward should have gone in the house with Peter though. He knows he can't be alone.
Isao84 chapter 28 . 8/11
I wanted to read it from the premise alone. I have enjoyed it all! Thank you for your beautiful words.
Knit Bit chapter 28 . 8/9
Thank you for this great read. I love the take one Charlotte and Peter being siblings. What a fantastic story.

Knit
VryUnique chapter 28 . 8/9
Thanks for the story it was great, I wish there was more.
I wish there was more on Alice, it doesn’t really make sense. She hates Edward because he pushed one of her friends when they were younger? Because Royce didn’t talk to her after that? I was waiting through the whole story to find out what the real issue was. If I had to guess I would say jealousy but it was never mentioned. Alice should have been thinking about her problem with Edward and motive for giving the address in this chapter as she was waiting for Esme. I can’t even fathom that she was helping Kate go and get Peter after hearing she wanted to make money off of him. What if she disappeared with him? She could have disappeared and done exactly that. I would have also liked some final confrontation with Jessica and maybe even Mike.
Either way I still really enjoyed the story. Thank you.
VryUnique chapter 27 . 8/9
Awwwwww... I guess there is an epilogue next. This story doesn’t seem long enough.
VryUnique chapter 26 . 8/9
I’m sure Edward will pull through. Can’t wait to find out where Edward’s family is. I hope Peter heard that Alice gave Kate the address and lets her know how he feels about that.
VryUnique chapter 25 . 8/9
Alice? It’s not like Alice was just bitching about Edward getting Peter, she gave Kate Bella’s address. What was her motive? Did she know Kate had a gun? Was she hoping she killed Edward so she would get Peter? I hope there are some consequences for Alice.
VryUnique chapter 23 . 8/9
I knew she would turn up and cause trouble.
VryUnique chapter 22 . 8/9
Is Alice going to give up so easy? She does seem spoiled and maybe selfish. I’m sorry for what happened to her to stop her from having kids. There seems to be a story in there. Is there a reason why she clashes with Edward that he doesn’t know about?
VryUnique chapter 21 . 8/9
I hate a nasty Alice but I hope bella gives as good as she gets where she’s concerned.
VryUnique chapter 20 . 8/9
No I love you back...? I guess the cops need to be called soon. Peter is still down as a missing minor. Edward might get in trouble or have a lot of explaining to do if he is found with him.
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