Looking awesome now! Wonder if Valentine and Three escaped yet?

Sorry to ask over here, but your PM is disabled and i’m getting desperate. Please please please continue Partners, it’s literally the best SAO fanfic i’ve ever read, and there’s hardly any other Kirisuna stories out there. I’ve read it three times and every time i get to the end i just wish at carried on. Sorry about this.

Please keep updating I love this story.

Love this story

Good chapter

Great gag at the end. Loved the chapter and glad you’re back.

Really enjoying your Story so far. You are great at getting the personalitys like in the anime. I can just imagine them acting the same way. Nojiko is a tad pushy but other than that your doing great

Looks like the Straw hats and marines have found Yuba, but as a dried up waste land, let's hope they will stop Crocodile and the rebellion in time, good luck.

Good work.

Excellent update

So you left only sanji out of the cammels? Theres gotta be a sneaky reason for that... what are you planing?

Quite good work.

nice to have ya back, and it looks like the Straw hats and the marines have teamed up to stop Crocodile and Baroque works, let's hope they'll do it in time, can't wait for more on this story, looking forward to see Vivi, Karroo, Conis, Suu and Carrot joining the crew in this, I'll bet Conis would make a good nurse in training under Chopper's teachings and Vivi being a good negotiator, hmm... i wonder if there will be any 4th wall breaks in this... good luck.

Hey~~~

finally had time to get caught up on your story/au/take-on one piece... And boy, do I love it! I adore the addition of Johnny and Yosaku, I was always sad that they didn't come in the og series, they would fit so well and your story just proves it! (Also they evolved fighting styles? Pure gold! I admire the cheesiness XD ).

Also Nojiko as quartermaster gets all the points! Finally Nami can't blackmail and indebted the guys so much. And I love that you made her a mix of sharp-shooter and close combatant. That makes her a very versatile type of fighter! I'm really excited about her interactions with Ace too. (I admit, it's partially because Ace/Nojiko is my fav crack ship in OP but well, what can you do \_(ツ)_/ ).
Ms. Golden Week was a completely unexpected addition and I'm intrigued about what you are going to do with her!

Also, I'm probably in severe minority but I wish that Vivi stays in Alabasta, her dedication to her country and rule was always one of those things I admired and loved the most in her character. Besides, Alabasta will need her now more than ever. 'Course it's just my opinion do whatever you want! You proved more than enough that you know what you're doing and that you're good at it!

Also, I'm very excited for your plans for Skypea as (contrary to a lot of people) it's one of my favorites arcs. I've read in other comments that a lot of people wish you add Conis and Suu to the crew after that arc (I mean, you can make them a communication expert and pet of SH or something \_(ツ)_/ ) and I think it's cool but have you considered maybe Wyper? And making him a scout? I mean, his interactions with Johnny and Yosaku on the crew would be so entertaining. (A vicious, straight guy vs the extreme cheesiness of those two XD And as a new guy he could have more of a equal footing with them which is impossible with Zoro as he is their master.)

Of course, I'm gonna read no matter what you decided on since the story is so entertaining and characters are so lovable and I just can't get enough XD
Wish you all the best and tons of inspiration to make that story even better!

Cheers with love!

PS. I completely forgot to mention but I love Nojiko's dream and I am excited for my story for the cheese boys!

Please update more regularly. I like this story.