Reviews for Star Wars: Ravager
Guest chapter 12 . 8/27
I really hope this story isnt abandoned. It's one of the few I enjoyed all the way through, and I dont often see the concept of the OC leading his own Clone Battalion. It's been almost a year since this was updated, but I still wait for the next chapter.
RandomCoolGuy chapter 12 . 8/24
abandoned?
Seatrick chapter 12 . 7/28
Ummmmm so this ever gonna be updated again or is it dropped
Helily chapter 12 . 7/26
I want it to work out in Ryn’s way. Ah, Boba, too, I guess (besides, Jedi, good riddance). So, you still into this story, or no?

Wait, what level is Ryn these days? Also, I like Ryn’s unit despite not seeing much of it. (And yes, Ryn, I hate Jedi, too. So much. Evil little brats that they are).

But anyway, the point is, I appreciate this bit of adventure into SW fandom and pretty much really like this Ryn guy, so yeah, fun times, much thanks, good luck with whatever you’re currently up to.
Tony McNucklz chapter 12 . 6/18
this story lacks any emotional attachment. there isn't an investment in the outcomes. the characters are so brief an appearance that they become irrelevant within the same chapter they are introduced. and the characters feel half designed, more like a caricature picture than a living being. the plot feels like a list of bullet points of things happening with unnecessary dialogue mixed in. the premise of the story and character creation is a unique and interesting concept, but the Gamer powers seem to be utterly unnecessary. completely unimportant after the intitial stats. the very definition of a superfluous plot point the reader thinks is important, before they realize that the author completely forgot about it.
You came up with what is to me a very original and unique concept. Unfortunately the execution is lackluster at best.
Tony McNucklz chapter 8 . 6/18
fucking moderator is some fourth wall lazy explanatory bullshit. in the infinite multiverse supposedly the main character got dropped in the one he's not allowed to affect?
fuck off.
Tony McNucklz chapter 6 . 6/18
feels like you kicked maul in the teeth. he was a gaddamn survivor of the highest level, a weapon crafted specifically for combat. he's survived some serious ambushes. him just 'forgetting' the MC is the definition of your very own illogical plot armor protecting your want to not deal with him later on
Tony McNucklz chapter 2 . 6/18
immediate writer fuckup. you just insert another language like the reader is going to know what is happening and what the words mean. I'm guessing adake and buir are words for family relationships. skraan i guessed meant weapon since you just said he didnt see his weapon, only google told me it was actually the word for food.
the reader should never have to use google to comprehend conversations.
Iceyunderground chapter 8 . 6/17
First impression, seems interesting. Moderator introduced, I'm done, good bye.
Empyrean Asura chapter 9 . 5/30
huh im more surprised you didn't think such a backlash would've occured. the story already ain't the best since it is fast paced and doesn't build up characters it's basically all telling and no showing. no development. just the process barely described if any and then the end result. so introducing a character to further break the crappy immersion just for basically a way to tell the intentions of the character?

such a bullshit one like a moderator that is concerned for a few million lives? especially in a universe like star wars? I'm more surprised that the moderator wasn't surprised that MC wasn't balls deep in many women by now forcefully or not.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/22
No he isn’t a force user?
Enclave1 chapter 1 . 5/11
Pleaseplease keep this going it's quite good
Fablemaster chapter 8 . 5/7
realistically interdimensional beings even moderators that would oversee possibility universes would not fraternize fraternize lower interdimensional beings even if it is just to Simply poke at them but hell it's my own point of view how are being of supreme Banning Authority would have done to someone who's reborn into a universe they're quite familiar with
Wolfinstein chapter 12 . 4/16
Awesome please don't stop!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/11
Did you forget that your sending him into this as an eight year old?
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