i quite liked this story. it was a good duality between Remedios and Lakyus and the different paths they took given different external variables (maybe Remedios doesn't go crazy if she still had all her friends like lakyus).

one thing that really bothered me about this story is that in this last chapter Demiurge acts kind of out of character.

in your previous chapters, Ainz specifically tells all the guardians that Neia is not to be harmed, ever; yet in this chapter Demiurge says it is fine as long as they bring her back. this seems like an explicit disregard of Ainz' will.
in previous chapters, Ainz lets it known to the guardians that Neia is doing his will and that he trust her to do his will. In this chapter, Demiurge decides to sabotage her plan, essentially sabotaging ainz' will...for like no good reason. It wasn't like this was left open ended, your previous chapters have ainz straight up tell them all that she is doing his work and that they should help her. it just seems very out of character for an NPC whose main personality trait is to be very pedantic to all of a sudden start disregarding explicit statements by his lord.
Worst of all, his reasoning for doing so in this chapter makes absolutely no sense. "they can't take on all the refugees at once?" What? Why? Since when? it was explicitly stated in the throne room by Ainz that he would take on all the refugees as his domain was pretty empty. why all of a sudden can they not afford to? and why would demiurge decide that the people that ainz decided to save needed to be culled? seems very out of character and bordering on treacherous for a loyal servant of nazarick.

I do love your writing though, and i've been binging this story since i found it a few days ago.

Sidenote - forgot to mention, that i think you forgot to make lakyus' sword talk to her. in canon doesn't it like whisper to her or something and driver her crazy at night.

Sidenote - i wonder who is stronger between Remedios and Dark Remedios. i think DR has more rage and raw strength but she would lose by a good margin in terms of power. my reasoning is that DR has lost the ability to use holy light power. it's not hard to see that she has way more evil affinity than anything she fights now and i doubt her holy attacks would work (similar to what happened with neia). so LR (Light Remedios) would just have to rely on Holy attacks to defeat her.

sidenote - sorry for any typos, happy new year

Do you lose your faith in Iraq ? Make sense you don't use any magic in the remedios camp to help the people foot: this soldier formation make you do good story's. Thank you

Demiurge could like this girl name yuri

If you consider that the remedios sword can curt only bad people you have a point. Thank you for more one chapter

Short chapter are great

I remember that the sword of remedios can't do any damage in good people. I love your text you are the best fanfic author of overlord

buen fanfic-good fanfic

huh. interesting.

This was one of the Best ever you out did yourself with this one Bravo

... hmn... wasn't what i expected but hey its a good way to cut it... im not really good giving reviews or criticisms so... im sorry?... but yes i like it... thanks for the updatesD

Would you mind doing the epilogue AFTER it's no longer a spoiler?

Huzza! It's Back! All Hail The Glory Of Nazarik and The Basement Dwelling Non-Religious Dragon!

I feel like Demiurge is somehow the clown despite his vast intelligence, or ironically and indirectly because of it.

It is exciting to see the action beginning, but with this story complete, there is that nagging feeling of doom that as the various side stories are completed, the main story will also be winding up to its completion.

And I DO NOT WANT THE MAIN STORY TO END!

Or at least, not end too soon!

Can't wait to see Remedios and co. goes to Destination Fucked in God Rising.