Another great chapter

Wonderful and UNIQUE story! Alice leaving, and Aro allowing Bella to live life as a human? Not sure how I feel about that. Jasper and Bella really need to comfort each other :) Always love them as a couple! Felix flirting is a hoot!

My god do I hate Demetri but I also love non-canon ships and this is fueling me. I have no idea where this is going but I’m excited for the ride.

honestly i’m emotional just writing this because that bit about life moving on and emily not fitting back into her college town struck a chord with me, and now i'm having the same feeling x10 with bella and edward’s stunted communication. there are such bizarrely specific parallels to my own relationship that is falling apart— and reading it was both validating and painful.
i think what makes this version of bella great is that she changes and grows through her experiences, she’s dynamic. and it’s nice to be a witness to that change, and even seeing some of my own mirrored in her. so, thank you.

ok first of all thank you for giving the twilight ladies actual personalities lmao. came here for dem/al, stayed for the solidarity between alice and rosalie, alice and bella being, you know, actual complex characters, and now emily-bella! seriously, this is great. also thank you for making emily bi, these little bits of casual representation can mean so much.

Great chapter

Great to have a new chapter! And a very emotional one at that! I wonder what Bella wrote? Are you continuing the story? Hope so!

I hope you didn't give up this story and I want to see flash-back of Demetri and Alice, I'm sure she met him when he was on a mission and she probably didn't know he was a tracker. I think no all Volturi stay in the high castle for centuries.
I'm sad for Jasper but Alice tried to not hurt him. I want to see some interaction between Rosalie and Demetri, also if Bella becomes a vampire, I hope we'll see more Felix/Bella.

Really liking your story. It's sad, painful, and I am not sure where you are going with it, but I am enjoying the journey. Bella's perfect view of the Cullens really shattered, on top of all the pain of their leaving her. Good scene with Leah and always enjoy Jasper/Bella moments. I have often felt they would get along well as they both 'feel' strongly. Glad you had Bella mentally working on her shield while with Jasper. Although she is still human, I always felt that she could practice and develop it more, even before she changed.

Thanks for writing!

Another great chapter, please continue writing this story. I would love to know how it ends. It was shockingly a nice surprise to see Bella standing up for herself against Jacob and Leah. Then with Jasper, especially after he frightened her with his powers. She's starting to change her mind about being a vampire and realized that she's painted them as a perfect beings but finally is seeing that they are flawed just like everyone else.

Loved seeing Bella lose her shit in her interactions with both Leah and Jasper.

Wow this chapter. I loved seeing Bella interact with Leah and Jasper. She’s actually talking with them, not being talked at like in the books. I’m excited to see where this goes!

Love it! Need more!

Another wonderful chapter. I love seeing Bella interacting with the Volturi. Felix is such a man whore and I loveeee it.

Bittersweet chapter. I hope Bella goes with the Volturi. Demetri knows that their wedding is off so now Bella is a liability.