hi if ur interested in someone cleaning up ur chapters I'm able love the idea of this fiction just needs to be worded better

just wanna see him fuck cersei

Something for the rewrite the Black Walls and Great Bridge should survive the fall of Volantis, they were made with enchantments that render them practically unbreakable, it would take 100 dragons to even crack either.

YEP! Just as much as the rest of Season 8, for heavens sake it was worse then the Rise of Skywalker

I have just figured out what you meant by Jack "Worraps". I am an idiot.

Exciting. You had some real twists in the past few chapters.

Hey, just wanted you to know I've been binging this fic for the past day. Powerful!Jon is my guilty pleasure, so this has been a fun read. The OCs are interesting; I like how you've been bringing in extinguished houses from canon. The super-long chapters are also nice.

Have a good day and keep up the good work.

This whole ned will die thing makes no fucking sense.

My Polish is really rusty but message me the lines, I’ll do my best. I lived in Poland for 19 years, and still talk Polish to my family

This fix needs to be burnt.

Look, I get the idea is mass harem and all, but can we not have Arya. It just feels fucking weird.

What the fuck. So Jon just casually allows three of his men to burn to death to potentially hatch dragon eggs? He doesn't wait to, I dunno, get some fucking prisoners instead, which he should certainly have?

I will apologize btw for assuming Lightbringer was Darksister.

Ok, ngl. Very sweet or Tormund to be naming his daughter after a Stark. Wonder how he'll react when he finds out that's the name of Jon's mom.

Wait, she's three fucking months pregnant and they're just now finding out? They should've figured it out a month sooner.