Ugh all this dark and gloom... getting a drag!
I know its all for a reason but wish could end haha. Though, I feel the brunt has been falling on Cynthia recently. Damien seems way more ruthless this AU. And that Officer Jenny is gonna be shamed by her family I feel..

They deserved to travel together, get stronger together, and I don't care what their parents say it's their journey not the parents, not the law, not even the champions combined.

its getting more and more iinteresting...

Wait?! Its seriously been that long already!? 4 years? Wow!

I will say, and know you'll take it as constructive criticism. Still feel/wish could be some sunny and happy times! Been pretty dark much of the story... can't wait for the sunny chapters you're calling for!

Heh. Can't wait for Ash and Cynthia to meet or maybe bump into each other again. This'll be awkward! Though worse will be Cynthia and her mother. Since there's some bad blood still it seems.

So now seems she has (potentially) here Garchomp and Glaceon. And poor Roilu, knowing what's going on but too young to help or such.

Cannot wait for the next chapter! Hope not too long but also at your own pace. Stay safe during this still crazy time!

It's how you face your fears to overcome obstacles.

Wtfh. Why are you messing with early trainers like may. I get cynthia but may damn it

Oh, you've done the hype justice and then some. Gotta be honest thought for the longest time Mystic was gonna be an Umbreon not an Espeon. Can't wait for the Lavender Tower conclusion.

Ohh nice an espeon can’t wait to see what Mystic can do now. And yes I’m a very avid reader Lool when I enjoy a story it gets read quickly. I wonder what ghost type Pokemon ash will capture.

So when will Ash and Cynthia travel together again?

História excelente!

I am scared

Good luck.

Good story but I don’t like how Cynthia is the person who has developed ‘counter shield and ice aqua jet’ when they were Ash and Dawn’s moves in Sinnoh, couldn’t she develop something more original.

It seems as Ash can’t stay out of trouble smh.

What was the point in them buying nest balls if they didn’t catch any bug Pokemon in Viridian forest lol. General question not many other opportunities to catch them. Good story so far