Reviews for Cat Fight
Rathable chapter 1 . 11/11/2019
Really good story man, I wish this had a continuation.
Zeobide274 chapter 1 . 5/1/2019
Damn this was good.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/26/2019
*When Lulu finally manages to bust into the bathroom where Lupa and Lemy are hiding.*

Lupa: “Lemy? If this is it, I just wanted to say that I always had a crush on you!”

Lemy: “Lupa, I accidentally dropped your toothbrush in the toilet and didn’t clean it after!”

Lupa: “What?”
SomeBloke420 chapter 1 . 2/5/2019
I'm sad this is only a one-shot, cause this cracked me the fuck up, especially that ending, #RIPLincoln
Guest chapter 1 . 2/4/2019
Do you take requests? Since I don’t have an account I was hoping you could answer in your next story.
Mikey457281 chapter 1 . 2/3/2019
Next day, 10 girls gonna sit on the electric chair.
nuuo chapter 1 . 2/2/2019
Ha, that ending. A fun story and a bit of an epilogue. Really an impossible task keeping rest of sisters happy but it shows here how its the sisters are their own worst enemies. Fucked up that Lincoln missed one of his kid's birth.
Hot shot chapter 1 . 2/2/2019
Wow talk about a cat fight can't wait to see what you come up with love how they all got into a fight keep them coming
Guest chapter 1 . 2/1/2019
What an interesting story. Is this a one-shot or is there more to it? I've got to it admit the crazy fight scene at the end felt like a bit too much as far as brutality went. For instance, I'd be more inclined to believe Luan would yank Lucy's hair out rather than try and set it on fire. But I really enjoyed the girls dishing with each other about their lives and pasts with Lincoln and all those comfy and sexy little pseudo-vignettes they shared over drinks leading up to the climax. The build in tension throughout was on point, and you can't help but resent Lola for messing up their family time. At the same time though it's in character for her, and that makes everything come off more honest. It felt like a bunch of fics in one actually and I really love it when details like the ones you included are featured, it makes the world seem so much more real and alive, like there's stuff going on besides what's happening then and there and these characters really do have lives beyond the story itself. That kind of thing is the best as far as I'm concerned.

Truthfully I don't mind the Sin Kids, but I've always been way more interested in what children meant for Lincoln's relationships with his sisters rather than the kids themselves, so I found this fic really scratched the itch I have for that. Terrific job overall with everything, the story is well paced and, even more importantly, well-characterized. I really love it when the characters in fics feel like the actual ones from the show, just with a few more years on them, so I had a great time reading. Thanks a lot for posting this. I hope you write more of these kinds of fics in the future too!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/1/2019
This was great! Also...I wonder what happened with Lyra, Lemy, Lupa, and Lulu? Hopefully, you can make a sequel showing what happened with the four.
wollyworld chapter 1 . 2/1/2019
It was at that moment Lincoln knew he fucked up
Imperviousking chapter 1 . 2/1/2019
Don’t bail on people just to screw Lincoln, Especially not your sisters who are know to plot against you. I kinda would’ve waited till I was a city away before bailing them out, just for safety.
UltimateSTH chapter 1 . 2/1/2019
You see Lincoln, this is why you don't fuck your sisters and bail on them, that's shitty
msjorten chapter 1 . 2/1/2019
NICE. fav
LoudRisque chapter 1 . 2/1/2019
I'd read this on pastebin a while ago.
And it was shit (in a good way)

Really, the story is hilarious and very funny.
I think that same.

Anyway, its like a background story on how they got their children.
And its very hot to heard Lincoln bail his sisters activity to fuck another sisters.

Its also cute about Lily.

Keep up the work lad or lass:)

P.S. Were you gonna only write SinKids plot or something? Because if you do.. Maybe you could give me some crash course about the sinkids.