Reviews for Present Imperfect
Hetc chapter 13 . 8/3
Like others, I'm not always keen on next gen fanfic, but this works well. I look forward to seeing how it's resolved, while feeling sorry for this timeline's characters, particularly Draco.
Thanks for writing.
MargaritaS chapter 18 . 5/12
so i dont usually read next gen, but this series is fantastic, great story
Haveyouseenmyprefectbadge chapter 18 . 1/30
that was thoroughly enjoyable. usually I'm not a fan of OCs, next gen, or no pairing stories but I'm so glad I decided to read this! your a wonderful writer! thank you so much for sharing this!
Winter.Blue2234 chapter 18 . 12/28/2019
This was wonderful! I enjoyed the plot and the character building. I look forward to seeing more!
Renny236 chapter 18 . 10/11/2019
I think I loved this one even more than the first. On to read the last.
JanuaryLestrange chapter 18 . 8/5/2019
I do love your Lucius. Let’s hear it for Gregor Mendel!
JanuaryLestrange chapter 17 . 8/5/2019
Love this !
SnapeIsMyPatronus chapter 18 . 5/30/2019
This was amazing!
robituputup chapter 18 . 5/13/2019
Great fic! I read it because I loved the first story of this series (?) And also enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing!
RAV3N R1PP3R chapter 18 . 5/10/2019
Loved the story!
Sab81790 chapter 17 . 5/9/2019
I'm glad she decided to get resorted and took ownership of her previous mistake. I'm also super curious as to who her future someone could be, hehehe!
Sab81790 chapter 15 . 5/9/2019
I won't be surprised if this Hermione does something to impede them changing everything back, in this world she has had no one but Draco and even though a part of her knows the other time is better for everyone I can see how it would also be very hard to truly believe it exists. Especially when you are being forced to give up what she has to knowing that if it works, she will honestly never know because her timeline will cease. It's a huge jump off blind faith and this Hermione has been forced to become a lot more selfish.
Sab81790 chapter 14 . 5/9/2019
Oh boy, sounds like Pansy is in a snit about something...
RhodaBush chapter 18 . 5/8/2019
Thank you...
VividVideoGeek chapter 18 . 5/8/2019
I've enjoyed your story and I'm glad you're planning on a sequel. I would love to see more one shots of Past Imperfect between Hermione and Severus and their lives together with our without the kids. Perhaps more one shots on how Draco and Astoria got together? It's almost like you owe it to him since he's been through so much in your stories! Thanks for writing and sharing.
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