Nothing special just following canon so far

Will other servants make an appearance? ALSO MOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRR!

I mean, if you do try to learn english while writting this story it will be alright, but if you pretend to half-ass this and not correct the mistakes or search for a beta (someone who proofreads your chapters) you better be prepared for an angry reader with too much free time that wouldn't mind flaming against you every fucking chapter.

I like this. Im not a fgo guy, shirou for the win!, but I find this really interesting. Ren, pragmatic but you could at least secretly help the guy. Don't be a dick. Also, I hope the other 2 die. Or a shit ton of servants come and mess this world up for messing with their friend.

more please

heh, guess who has both Ishtar, Quetzalcoatl, but also Mysterious Heroine X Alter?

it's meeeeeeee!

And I'm a free to play too!

...still didn't get merlin though. :(

This fanfic is TRASH

story doesn't feel any different from the original. just Naofumi replaced by Ritsuka. Nothing different really. Sigh

Nice to see Da Vince and Fou again. Ritsuka will really need a discerning eye like Da Vinci for managing money and possibly inventing things they could use against the Waves. And best girl from Shield Hero has arrived.
Ritsuka may not like the idea of being a slave owner but Gilgamesh and Ozymandias owner slaves and their people loved them all the same.

Glad to see that this setback hasn’t broken Ritsuka’s spirit. He’s been through way too much shit already to allow the King and Malty’s treachery get him down, after all stronger and more dangerous enemies have all tried before them and they’re now dead.
Keep on working hard Ritsuka! I’ll be cheering you on all the way!

Well. I knew the betrayal was coming sooner or later but Ritsuka will bounce back from this with no problem. He’s faced far worse after all.
I think you should take Sagittarius up on his offer to be your beta reader. He could help you with the grammar and spelling to make it easier for your ideas to flow better into a written format.
Also Mash Best Kouhai! Best Shielder!

Really interesting story you got here. I have parent whose first language was not English so I can understand the difficulty in writing in a new language all of a sudden so I’m not going to give you any gripe on the spelling or grammar mistakes in this chapter.
Ritsuka should be able to handle himself well if he remains in character and in terms of potential, his potential easily eclipses all of the other heroes since he just got done having a fist fight with Goetia himself and won! Both times! Not to mention all the experience he gained from running around the singularities and fighting alongside his servants against other servants like Altera, Artoria Alter (Both Versions), or powerful monsters and gods like the Lion King and Tiamat.
Keep up the great work and I cannot wait to see where this will go.

Sad this hasn't continued in awhile...

hmm... there's selfless heroic, and then there's foolishness. I am talking of course, the fact that Ritsuka even neglected to complete a simple gease with the Slave Merchant not to negate his deal. Something even Emiya Shirou would have done. But perhaps he cant?

hahaha.
a genuine hero indeed. actions of others is at the end... meaningless, huh. what an attitude. a hard path to walk, indeed.