AWESOME

Wow Natsu just has zero personality in this.

I honestly read through the whole story. It was pretty good and entertaining. I like I do wish that this story could get more reviews but still overall it was a nice and fun journey. I did like the twists and turns you did it was really good and I do like what you added and your own twist to the story so good job!

How comes.. if Natsu is 0 Wizard Saint, a Sting like caliber mage able touch him.
If he is that strong, there were a cuple of events/fights where he struggled against enemies whos were a lot weaker than him.
This story is good. I read the Natsu x Ulthear storyt too. That was good too. But the fault was the same.
"He is the strongest" but some little shit can do harm him... how?
I read a lot of like these stories where the Author forget in the middle what write in the beginning... It's frustraiting.

Hi there.

Hate to tell you, but ryanvanmatre has stolen your story. It's currently on "ryanvanmatre23". I say it that way, because he has a bad habit of this. The admins have already banned him on 24 separate accounts. You can find details of everything going on with him here: (FFN URL) -slash- topic -slash- 124913 -slash- 168411735 -slash- 1 -slash-

There's a template in the second post of the "How to" thread that you can send directly to the site admins to ask them to delete the stolen content. Frankly, I wish they'd permanently ban the guy, and I don't understand why they haven't.

Sorry this happened, but I hope it all gets taken care of quickly for you.

thank you for updating been waiting for this

I like this shit it's interesting. But pretty good actually.

I liked this ending is strange that Erza's mother is married to literally the other half of her husband, but I liked the ending.

Beautiful! Sob sob sob...
Btw, at first you described Rob have Erza's eye, then August said he have Natsu's eye. Which one actually? Or just the colour of eye is the same with Erza but with shape of Natsu's eye? XD

Great end to a great story

Beautiful story! Thank you for this story! Please make a epilogue!

I still don't understand if Natsu's personality and E.N.D have merged into one personality now is that it, now they are one?

Nice chapter! It seems August is not dead! Yooohhhooo!

ERZA TO THE RESCUE

BEEN WAITING FOR THIS YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH

Finally! I caught up to latest chapters! Awesome chapters dude! I like the way you change the story. But, maybe you want to check it back for your last chapters. Sometimes, the story is not making any sense. You will understand what I said when you reread it.