Reviews for Natsu the ultimate dragon slayer |
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jackyfloresq2001 chapter 11 . 6/28/2019 CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER IN THIS STORY |
StoryPlayz chapter 9 . 2/23/2019 Hey, Good job man! I really like the way this is going! Keep it up! I'm partially curious though... how do you guys write so much? 50,000 words at 9 chapters? That's ridiculous! It's not filler, either, there's actually something going on! There's content! How do you do it? I need to know! |
Nate Eaton chapter 1 . 2/23/2019 Hey there buddy! You've got a great story going on here. But there are a few things you can do to make it better! For one, when a new person talks, then make a new paragraph. Even if there a sentence long it makes it much easier for the reader (And makes your story a little longer). It's an easy fix you can do for all your chapters and will make everything a whole lot easier. Secondly, try adding more detail to what you're writing. Such as describing what a spell looks like. What town you're in, what do characters look like? This makes it better for the reader to comprehend what's happening. That's it for now, keep up the good work and if you need any help just PM me! |
Wolfay dragoon chapter 7 . 2/16/2019 Thank you for this really good story dude |
Neo Infinity chapter 2 . 2/16/2019 Please fix your writing style, some paragraphs are very long and some sentences are hard to read. |
rufus264 chapter 7 . 2/15/2019 Great chapter |
Guest chapter 4 . 2/12/2019 YAH FAIRY TALE |
rufus264 chapter 6 . 2/13/2019 Great chapter |
ShadowFlameDragon03 chapter 5 . 2/12/2019 Great chapter! Keep up the great work |
rufus264 chapter 5 . 2/11/2019 Great chapter |
rufus264 chapter 4 . 2/11/2019 Awesome chapter |
Samuel Demarcos Gaona Martinez chapter 4 . 2/11/2019 Love what your doing keep it up |
rufus264 chapter 3 . 2/9/2019 Great chapter |
rufus264 chapter 2 . 2/3/2019 Great chapter. |
rufus264 chapter 1 . 2/3/2019 Great start |