Reviews for Naruto-The God above Gods
Bryan Of Grimm chapter 5 . 6/23
Or he has no need for it?
Bryan Of Grimm chapter 5 . 6/23
Does Naruto not use his chakra anymore?
Guest chapter 3 . 6/13
More more more more more
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 5 . 4/18
The family made stronger is good. I never want MC beloved to be weak. It's my greed so be it, Naruto needs a soul bound realm to take his family where he goes. Moving seperate on missions with his clones or other means of powerful backup is good, being seperated for months or years shouldn't happen. Thanks, be well, stay safe, and God's speed to get past pandemic.
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 4 . 4/17
The harem is needing time for family bonding developments.

The fight with alternate Minato was interesting. The evil deeds revealed to the public so far are good further foreshadowing of soon to be smack downs of righteous justice on the heads of the bad people like danzo.

I gotta say it made me smile hoping for dragons then reading Naruto's summons are dragons. Are they different types of dragons; far east Asian, Asian, European, African, dragons of all mythos, earth types, ocean types, elemental types, metal types ? He gotta be a dragon sage. Thanks, be well, stay safe, and God's speed against viral epidemics.
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 3 . 4/17
How many times have these two had sex before they cultivated this master servant sex domination play? When did the lovin get stale for this young couple? I get it's fantasy fanatic fiction, but he returned several weeks earlier from a three year journey apart from his wife and he's now 16 years old. Most likely since this is your early writing, you've realized that ages, times, etc,...are a part of the bigger picture in the fanfic stories you present to us pervs. Thanks, be well, stay safe, and God's speed save us all from viruses.
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 2 . 4/16
My vote is all these amazing beauties for the harem god. The young married couples forest home with the pets should soon get some chapter time, I hope. Several things don't add up so far. Since the story is entertaining I'm just thinking alternate alternate universe and it appears to be a Wincest realm. Thanks, be well, stay safe, and God's speed to us all.
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 1 . 4/16
I'm confused on Naruto graduating the academy if he's missing for several years while thriving in the forest of death. How doesn't Naruto know about his mama and sister left evil father to live in Uzumaki compound? I'm brain damaged, some days are very bad, everyday is not my best day ever. Overall the concept is interesting. Thanks, be well, stay safe, and God's speed.
thunderofdeath97 chapter 1 . 2/21
Yugaos breats arent that small also i personally bever found anko that hot but to each their own
Kingkong101 chapter 5 . 1/21
Not cool incest sucks
The God of Perverts chapter 5 . 1/13
Is this dropped?
Re Lovely Lover chapter 4 . 12/6/2019
1) Thanks to his chakra usage naruto should be able to cloak himself in chakra to separate himself from contact with the mineral in the waters of the one piece region. Especially when covered on his biju cloak which would shield and corrode the mineral. So as long as he pays attention he hasnt given himself a crippling weakness to that mineral.

Even if he ingests it he could dissolve it from within quickly.

2) Why did he use the power like that and likely cause a bunch if property damage? If sewage backs up over half the village hes in trouble.

3) That part about him sending the letters needs to be redone. It's just both if them repeating the exact same thing over and over again.

4) I dont understand why Minato just stands there repeatedly letting Naruto say and do whatever he wants knowing if he does it just screws over his image.

5) If the seal on the toads does what he said then it should've been affecting him as Naruto was working with him and the threat he made towards Naruto.

6) Gelal stone hints at another continent with a more tech based theme. Allowing for crossovers with tech ti a degree. If you decide to add that to the story.

Ichiban Ushiro no Daimaou, Seikoku no Dragonar, Shukufuku no Campanella, Full Metal Alchemist, 100. (Anything with unique weapons or armor that may require unique crafting but not circuits and electronics.)

7) Samurai exist already and with their self enhancements through chakra can have characters with super strength that fight just like Wonder Woman.

Even Tsunade does it why not Diana.

In fact it opens up for samurai characters and other fighters who could use chakra or just the physical ki aspect in their fighting and allow for characters from fighting games and anime. DOA, Virtual Fighter, Tekken, Street Fighter, Soul Caliber, Voltage Fighter, King of Fighters, Guilty Gear, Fighting Vipers, Granblue Fantasy, Last Origin, Sword Girls, Fire Emblem, Queen's Blade, Freezing, League of Legends, Final Fantasy, even ./hack if done right.

As long as characters from them can fit it's fine, though obviously not everyone could be used whether from numbers or compatibility. I mention ./hack because the equipment like staves tend to be large and could be special constructs like the Seven Swordsman only allowing for different levels of chakra manipulation for attacks in place of magic. The more advanced powerhouse stuff rare but low level stuff easier to get into the hands of their warriors and mages rather than ninjas on that continent.

Final Fantasy could have stuff like going into training and awakening a limit break through their energy manipulation. Whether ki (physical energy) chi (spirit energy which control of is used more with genjutsu or chakra the mixture of both.

Could even have some materia spawn at random with large mana wells/gathering/ley lines/focal points in general much like devil fruit does in the one piece region. Maybe that portion of the continent is closer to the High Chakra continent?

8) Just because she was mentioned I figured I'd take a second on her and so you could have Supergirl bend space as a kekkai genkai.

In fact I think that's the kryptonian thing. Why they go from regular super strength to focusing and getting ridiculously powerful and fast. They warp space itself for flight, strength, defense with the energy they gather. While abke to directly use that energy with their physiology to channel it into their eyes for the eye abilities. The breath being the same with space, compressing air within.

Freezing breath I'd have to sit and think how he absorbs the heat from the air or void it within himself to chill the air.

Anyway while maybe not making her into her true supergirl self. At least not early in, she could manipulate space to have her strength, defense and flight abilities to a weaker degree.
Re Lovely Lover chapter 3 . 12/5/2019
1) I've never liked when people use gravity seals and weights then get ridiculous with them.

240,000 lbs of weight? The difficulty in touching things gently, the weight focused on his feet causing the very ground beneath him to compact and shatter depending on dirt or hard material. The inability to jump on anything like trees or buildings without acting as a wrecking ball.

Fine if it's a training ground designed to handle it and taking time. But many also do it quickly where in no time at all gravity that is pulling everything including their blood to pool at their feet is somehow quickly trained to withstand that much force? Every blood cell being 30x heavier in this case, 200 lbs being 6,000 with an added 240,000 lbs. Yikes. Though with the whole Asure godhood thing it's more believable but it doesnt change being careful if his interactions with objects while using those seals.

I just hope the story doesnt have him running around with it on while interacting with people or traveling. Understanding if he walks to the hokages office hed fall through the floor into the basement just on the first floor.

2) The CRA bit with him calling Minato a bastard doesnt fly. Just because he is hokage doesnt mean he can put his nose into clan business and forcefully choose wives for a clan head or heir.

Sure he could force him into the CRA as a pre agreed arrangement made by the clans should disaster strike. Even put stipulations of the amount of wives and such by a certain time as a safety precaution to their bloodline. However the hokage actually choosing the wives is something no clan would agree to because of political manipulation by getting their family into the clan to take over their power and get their an secrets. Even marry and divorce running off with children or having grandchildren leave the clan to their other parents family.

Lots of bad shit that makes no sense to allow.

3) Forgot to add the jutsu portion of the exam.

4) The part with Mebuki really should've been written out.

5) I like how Chocho was added. It was a complete surprise and a pleasant one at that. Though of course it makes me wish the others were as well. The only ones who wouldn't really work being Boruto and Himawari. Though I like Himewari there'd have to be an explanation on the uzumaki/hyuuga mix and either a removal or explanation of the whisker marks.

I'm sure all the others could work, like Kurenais daughter being her niece and such.

As for the Marvel/DC mention at first my brain came to a halt, partially due to supergirl being mentioned leading to near physical question mark appearing over my head. Once it started working again I realized yeah, a lot of them would actually work as long as they're adjusted for the naruto world and have their powers and skills shifted appropriately.

Any and all Avatar characters for instance. Like Azula could be the daughter of a noble or even the daimyo of the fire nation. Only her dads the same as in naruto and not the conquer happy one from avatar. Ty Lee and Mai being noble daughters.

Toph, Katara, Korra, Suki and so on. Of course male characters can be around too.

(DC) Livewire, Volcana, Riptide (Leeana Creel), Killer Frost, Poison Ivy, Tremor (brown skin/long hair)(Theres also a Marvel one), Mera, Tula, Huntress, Batgirl (really any of them, theres what 4?), Artemis, Cheshire, Starfire (whi could be like Natsuhi from Hoshigakure), Raven (could be a play off of Shion instead being linked to a greater demon against her wishes in whatever way the author wants), Terra, and so on.

Batman could be the head businessman of the land he comes from which could be made up since theres many minor villages in naruto as it is and can be a distant one beyond the land of snow for example. Businessman and ANBU, known as a jonin or tokubetsu Jonin who focused on taking over the family business but at night is their most skilled and intelligent stealth ANBU.

Semi retired working on his own and taken students. Thanks to his business the leader let's him do his own work due to time management and astounding service.

Jean Grey (Foreign Biju -phoenix, from a region of the world of high chakra/nature chakra concentrations or a spirit formed and gathered consciousness from longterm faith or myth from the chakra of the land of a volcano. Like a spirit that protects the land and has a shrine made by people. Forgotten or desecrated ones becoming monsters or youkai.)

That idea can even be used for a new region and enemies and such. The alternate region that normal humans cant survive without risking chakra poisoning/overload/ or even turning to stone.

Where the most powerful summons who retire or wish to grow further can be sent to through known transport and in fact may be where they originally hail from. Whether they still do or live in pocket dimensions or an alternate one along side the normal one idk.

It could be the origin of the chakra fruit which became the origin of chakra use to humans on the normal mainland's.

For the one piece addition it could be the random fruits actually pop up at random from random appearances of the leftover roots of the original tree that became the 10 tails. The roots remaining in the ground and sprung up bastardized kekkai genkai of all sorts. However have the weakness of the unique waters from that region of the world. The mineral that's in the water like salt that causes those with powers to go weak.

Since they aren't affected by normal filtered water and can drink and bath. The government is able to harvest the mineral and make chains and weapons of it like Smokers weapon. Therefore no need to say chakra users can be affected or you can say they can be and the mineral disrupts chakra period. Authors choice but I think it's better to say it disrupts the fruits ability to enhance the body. Like everyone knows when they die the fruit will come back into being so it exists within them empowering them.

(Marvel) Tremor (short haired Marvel version), Storm, Fire, Ice, Witchfire, Black Canary, Catwoman, Vixen (could be unique or from the origin land where the Inuzuka descendants come from). White Tiger.

Blair (Soul Eater), Kuroka (DXD), Koneko (DXD), Yoruichi (Bleach), Yasaka (DXD.

(These being examples of animal type characters that can be added from another land like the shark guy Kisame of the naruto series. If the spirit bit mentioned with the Phoenix is done than that's also an excuse for youkai, whether scattered along the elemental continent, from the high chakra continent or both.)

The High Chakra continent also gives an excuse for god like characters, mythological monsters/summons and so on aside from just the one piece region of the planet so the story can go on a long time and have OP opponents to face.

The one piece portion already allows for a long story and time for others besides naruto to become strong and rather OP. The High Chakra continent could be the finale even if he can explore bits throughout through summoning and transport with his summon or Karumi it will still be some time before he has the strength to truly explore or face the more hostile powerhouses who've staked claim to regions.
Re Lovely Lover chapter 2 . 12/5/2019
1) School curriculum, really needs to be upped if you age them up. It's a bit lax as it is in canon. Having them 16 and only needing to pass a written test, toss some kunai and shuriken, pass a basic taijutsu requirement and do 3 jutsu is underwhelming no matter how OP the MC the test shouldnt be so easy.

2) Kushina waiting after finding him i cant really understand. It just seems like a forced decisions he comes off as a stranger rather than a son to make it easier to indulge in incest maybe? Unnecessary to me to do it that way. Then i saw the One Piece reference and realized it's so he could go off and be a bad ass elsewhere. Though how this Minato would allow him to take the graduation test without ever taking a class doesn't make sense to me.

3)Byakugan can see the body, um glad someone else realized that and doesnt make the claim they can only see the chakra network.

No they can see chakra and focusing in can see the network. Which means they can see the bleed off and minor chakra flow through the body from the network and see an outline of the body too. Maybe they cant see bare flesh like the clothes aren't there but they can see the figure in another spectrum seeing it nude either way.

4) Nice to find another that doesnt ignore yakumo's existance.
Re Lovely Lover chapter 1 . 12/5/2019
I've never been a fan of the neglect stories, particularly because they never even make the attempt to make sense and force it instead.

Another personal reason is it bothers me when Kushina is supposed to ignore or hate him because I just remember her heartbreaking death in canon and it just seems wrong.

This one doesnt have Kushina like that but instead Minato is off his rocker. However it still seems off because Kushina who loves her son would spend time with him and care for him and hence notice something is wrong and him getting hurt with turn up and bloody clothes.

He also wouldnt believe he is hated by his family and just Minato and would be more likely to speak up to her and less likely to leave.

Even Kushina hearing Minato go off on him and instead if being "The Red Hot Habenaro" and rushing downstairs to deck Minato goes and pretends to sleep seems strange.

I could at least sort of reason out her not going off due to shock from the surprise and having thoughts racing too much to act on it but I still cant help see her rushing if to see him in the middle of the night at least unable to ignore it and sleep.

Finally when it comes to the female kurama stories it doesnt seem right when she falls for naruto when he is still little. Shes 1,000 years old basically and to fall in love with him when he hasnt done anything yet?

He hasnt had time to show his kindness, strength, determination, intelligence, anything for her to fall for. He ran off and had been training his ass off in the forest of death and has kept to himself.

Ni kind acts, no saving anyone, no chances to show his worth or strength of character. So why is a thousand year old being suddenly in love with him and going as far as to mate mark him?

Near century of solitude in seals Stockholm her into pouncing in the first male or something?

These things just dont seem right.
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