Reviews for Light in My Life
Nanih chapter 33 . 6/27
Hi! I read this full story within around..2 hours and 30 minutes. I started at 4am and finished it at 6. Anyway, I knew I had to leave a review. It’d be a crime not to. There are flaws that make this story flawless. Though if I were to be serious and pick a flaw it’d be that the writer delved more into before Aki and Toru got married and where Aki was confused at his feelings for Toru more than the actual relationship between the two. I don’t wish for you to elaborate on this story as I find the story good. I do wish that we could’ve gotten more chapters from the author about after Aki told Toru he loved her rather than Aki’s death, Torus kindness and Shigure. Please do not take this the wrong way as I have declared this one of my favourite Akiru fanfics. My favourite one is Living Louder but this one is a second coming close to 1st. I found all the characters to be in character but I do think Kyou and Yuki were all little OOC about the whole ‘Toru moving out stuff’ and so was Shigure, he was solemn which usually (in any situation) he would’ve cried about Toru leaving him and his ‘Little flower’ moving away. I hope I didn’t ramble too much..umm..oh well..It’s be nice if you replied to me, Author! I’d love to hear what you thought about my review. Well, I favourited the story and followed it!
LoneWolf004 chapter 14 . 5/16
Hehehe my cat boi can’t resist Tohru️
LoneWolf004 chapter 1 . 5/16
I love the part how Kyo just nods when Tohru asks if he wants strawberries
purpleradiance chapter 1 . 3/31/2017
nice story
kendalnr0201 chapter 33 . 6/11/2014
great story I liked how you played the characters
Otaku Mom chapter 33 . 12/14/2012
I totally enjoyed the last chapter. You nicely tied everything up, but this one was very interesting.

As a matter of fact, I found the complete story utterly fascinating. I love the way you took Akito, his selfishness, his unhappiness, and gradually transformed him into someone who could care for one special person.
Even more I like the way you developed a stronger, happier Akito in a very believable fashion.

I have to admit I was relieved that this was an Akito/Tohru romance. I thought it was trending in that direction, but she could easily have been paired with Yuki, Shigure, or Hatori...but I was thrilled this ended with Akito and Tohru together.

The male Akito is always the one that I feel the strongest 's the one that I've always felt there was the most hope for... I've never quite been able to buy into the Akito as a female...or that Yuki thought of Tohru as a mother. That's where I part ways with Takaya-san.

Thank you for writing an excellent story with an extremely plausible plot.
Otaku Mom chapter 20 . 12/14/2012
I know you wrote this story several years ago, but I am reading it for the first time. I found it in one of the archives that houses a few of my fanfics. You really weave a twisted tale...I think I have it figured out and then I find myself wondering if the obvious is really what I think it is. I'll have to continue reading...I'm having fun guessing. I think I know where this is going, but I wouldn't bet on it. Interesting story so far. I like the way you present Akito's point of view, and also have a good grasp of how other Sohmas will think. On to the next chapter.
EdhelwenOnieta chapter 33 . 6/27/2011
amazing! i loved it. i just couldnt stop reading it once i started.
DangoDaikazaku chapter 33 . 5/24/2011
I love it! You totally have it down pat! Your idea about breaking the curse is tremendously accurate in my opinion! Anyway I loved the story! I am totally favouriting this fanfic in my archive!
SadnessAndSorrow chapter 33 . 8/2/2010
I really liked this story, it was well written, interesting and deserving of more reviews than it has received. Great work!
PanickedSerenity chapter 33 . 6/20/2009
Lovely story! I liked how Akito changed gradually instead of "Poof! I love you Tohru! I nice as a kitten now!" I've read some truly terrible stories where he is suddenly an angel within a few chapters. Thanks for all your hard work writing this. I loved it!
NiminariAmriath chapter 33 . 5/5/2009
tohru's just amazing isn't she...good story ;-)
Mellow Melon Melody chapter 33 . 2/25/2009
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY! YOU DID AN AWESOME JOB WITH THIS, WOW! I've never read Fruits Basket before but I can't help but read awesome AkitoxTohru fics like this one... ;w;

Again, beautiful job!
lindajrjt chapter 33 . 1/3/2008
A most excellent story this is. Your story is definitely my favorites category. I enjoyed the way you portrayed everyone and it even took a long time to move Akito in the right direction! This story is one of the more brilliant masterpieces on this site, especially this category. Thanks for sharing with us.
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