| Reviews for Testament of the DXD |
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   sirvancelotgraves chapter 38 . 7/27 Glad to see you back. Thanks for the chapter. |
| thechampionmike957 chapter 38 . 7/23 I agree with that other person with the whole orgy scene bring added into Chisato's lemon. In regards to Chisato and Basara's relationship and rewriting small parts one thing you could do is stress his desire for Chisato is just that while he loves Mio and Yuki. Maybe show that there's some feelings there but it's mostly lust. That way when they go on their vacation trip that small feeling of love you've shown them having can be expanding upon and grow stronger than their lust for each other. I think Kakashi and Konan is fine. He doesn't need a harem. His fight with Loki was awesome and probably the best fight scene so far. Kakashi is becoming my favorite in this story. Thanks again. |
| erzauzumaki89 chapter 38 . 7/22 Good that you are well and that you updated the story after a while. Maybe you should check a few things because there's a character error, since Basara is mistaken for Ise, when Chisato talks to Saphire. I would like Reiri to stay with Basara. One of the ideas is that you use the clones in Basara as in the novel to make an orgy with Chisato. As for this chapter, if I liked the fight, it went well, compared to others I have seen. The chapters you plan to rewrite put what is a rewritten chapter. |
| laceye94 chapter 38 . 7/21 How about instead naming the chapters The Goddess I Desire and then The Goddess I Love? That way you can show the change from him desiring her to him loving her. Maybe you can also make it a 3 part thing where first chapter he desires her, the 2nd they start to feel more for each other while on their vacation, and then finally by the end they feel love as much as desire for each other. |
| akilja95 chapter 38 . 7/21 I feel like you should give Reiri to Basara and Shizuka to Issei. Issei doesn't have a human nurse in his harem so she can be with him. I also don't think Kakashi needs a harem. A harem doesn't really go with his character. |
| otherbarry6 chapter 38 . 7/21 Glad to see your story back. The only suggestion I really have has been mentioned before and that's just the characterization of sone characters felt a bit off. Like Basara cursing so much and Chisato acting too slutty. |
| Fortitude501 chapter 38 . 7/21 Dude you're alive! Welcome back man. Its been a while. |
| fisherlaw373 chapter 37 . 7/12 Hey dude I'm guessing this story has been dropped. Will you make an announcement that it has been? Just to not have us in suspense on when you'll return. |
| theraceytracey chapter 37 . 6/30 The story is coming back right? Or is it gonna be discontinued? If it is gonna be discontinued will you announce that it will? It's been awhile since we've heard anything and I hope we get some news of the future of this story, be it good or bad news. |
| eddywards0 chapter 37 . 6/15 Is the story still ongoing? |
| Ferocious Nightfury chapter 1 . 6/12 ...are you fucking serious?! Ghost rider died from a bike accident?! TF?! Is this fucking batman!? Ugh... this is so fucking cringy... could you not have done this in a better way? Oh man... shit. |
| therealtwoface9 chapter 37 . 6/12 I hope you find the time to update soon. It's been almost 3 months since we've last year's from you. I hope everything is fine. |
| greayharry chapter 37 . 5/30 Will this story be on hiatus until the pandemic is over? Or will it be on permanent hiatus? |
| LanceSennin chapter 24 . 5/26 Bruh you can't have a harem with Sona and not add Serafall in it |
| thechampionmike957 chapter 37 . 5/19 any news on the next chapter? I can't wait for you to come back. |
