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Great story so far!

I don't think I'm going to like Gilderoy Lockhart at all.
You have the beginnings of a brilliant story. I hope to read more of it soon. Thank you for writing :)

Hi! Good fic. You should update it. Also, I wanted to know, is Tom as good as he looks? Or manipulative?

Continuity error? Just what was Harry packing his gear into, before Fred and George brought up his trunk?
Two meanings for "trunk" in the same sentence. It would have been better form to have written, "...into the trunk of the car." or more idiomatically, "into the car's boot,"
Hermione is definitely 'one up' on dear cousin Draco.
Image sung by Gene Autry: "They never let poor Ginny join in any Quidditch games." :)
So 'Predator Gilderoy' is it?
Overall, a very nice blend of canon and original material.

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot.

oh so your lockhart is a pedophile lovely

More chapters please. This is a really good story.

Small oopsie: "weed" not "wheedle"

Murder most mysterious!

I like whatever the author is having, please.

Oh c'mon. Still reading it thou.

Glad to see you back! Great chapter. Someone else already mentioned the mistype so I won't Can't wait to see more!

Yay
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I love this story!
Though I think you got alohamora and wingardium leviosa mixed up. Alohamora unlocks locks, not levitates objects.

it's an interesting concept, or at least u pulled it of as interesting so far. we will see if u can hold the quality (and my interest ;Dbut if the the Riders r any indication I'm not worried :D