This is so good. Ann is definitely my favorite girl in the game ever since I saw her on the trailer. I really hope you make a sequel or a one shot epilogue where they start a family in new york or japan.

I'm dead. Their class had a bet on them.

Hilarious! Dude keep writing!

Awww man. That was a double-hit mood killer for these two XD

Oh shit i remember this! This was from that one anime show! Damnit i cant remember the damn name but i know its on crunchyroll lol damn i was dying when i was seeing and reading this part

You based this chapter off of Tsurezure Children, didn't you? Not that I mind of course!

She was nice enough to let them continue.

Solid chapter. I like how you managed to tie in everyone's reason(s) for being at Ann's birthday party. The confession scene itself was a mix of awkward funny yet endearment for these two who are very much heads over heels for each other.

The build-up to their eventual relationship seemed to flow at a nice pace, but the ending for this chapter felt a bit rushed. I can tell that you just wanted to get the story out after taking some time away. Although the only things I felt were wrong were just the small spelling errors and the ending. Everything else in between was more than enjoyable to read and I do look forward to any new pieces you come up with.

This sounds really good. Please continue. Ren and Ann forever.

this was a great chpater. i hope they confess next chapter