oh wow what going to happen next, this could get sooooooo good lol

Greetings Crystal.
I just stumbled upon this story by chance, and I must say, I am pleasantly surprised. I like this fanfiction. Stories where magic is not included are very rare. And it's nice to see how events unfold the old-fashioned, muggle way. Reading this far, I can't help but think of Albus Dumbledore when I read and carefully analyze all the mess Gibbs created. Why does it make me think of the old director? Because he has a phrase very consistent with what is happening, and I quote: "Love is blind," and out of love there have been countless stupidities. And although Gibbs rushed to protect Ianthe, the truth is ... that it is a Damocles sword that will result. The road to hell is riddled with good intentions, and the things that have been done in the world by that standard are unimaginable.

Ianthe's pain is raw and rough. I understand why you're making those kinds of decisions, and it's understandable that at times like that, your heart is in conflict. I read some comments, and it doesn't seem fair that they are judging Ianthe and Aaron so hard, he is just another idiot in love with the equation, and he only seeks a common good for a person for whom he is feeling a deep affection, and if we start analyzing the pieces, everything fits according to the personalities of each character. Harry (here Ianthe would be) is hot head when he is angry or when he enters a desperate situation; Aaron goes into protection mode and can also be given an impulsive streak like Ianthe and Gibbs, who had a wrong mistake. They are human beings, they deserve to err, and although it is fiction, it bothers me a little that they are so harshly judged.

If I'm honest, I wouldn't mind if this story ends in a threesome, Ianthe being the glue of the relationship. It's more. I would applaud if it were because all three deserve some true love in their lives.

I also have a constructive criticism for you, and I hope you won't take this wrong. I don't do it with bad intention, hopefully it will help you improve with your writing. You must accentuate that timeline where things are happening, because it is a little blurry, and everything is happening too fast. It is a chaos of time. If you do not read carefully and carefully, getting stones inside your head, you lose. Everything seems to happen in a week. Which is not.

With nothing more to add, I say goodbye.
I hope to continue reading more about this wonderful story.

PS: Sorry if my english is a little bland. It is not my first language.

Your story is so great, I can’t wait to read the next chapter. Please, update soon... Kisses

I mean I'm so torn.
Their plan could easily work, but secrets like this probably won't last that long.
But either way I'm looking forward to seeing this play out.

Please continue to update soon! I want to see her interaction with Jack.

yo creo que aaron se esta aprovechando de la situacion de ianthe nisiquiera la dejo acabar de procesar la notcia del embarazo antes de pedirle matrimonio se supone que el siendo perfilador debaria apoyarla como amigo antes que hacer lo que hizo
y ianthe deberia tomar las decisiones despues de aclarar las cosas con gibss y contarle lo del embarazo y su fallida relacion ya que ella nisiquiera le dio una oportunidad de saber las cosas que pasaban y llegar a un acuerdo antes de haceptar la propuesta asi de rapido con todas las hormonas y miedos a flor de piel
y gibbs deberia hablar urgentemente con ianthe y aclar las cosas y hablar con la verdad y con el corazon en las manos como dicen las cartas sobre la mesa
ese par son unos tontos y solamente deberian hablar cara a cara con las verdades y el corazon en las manos para que ese bebe tenga a sus padre y puedan tener una buena relacion ya que la comunicacion es la base de todas las relaciones y ser presentados a los que creen sus familias aparte ellos tienen una coneccion no la deberian desperdiciar asi :(
aun asi me gusto el capitulo aunque me rompio un poquito el corazon

I like the idea of a poly relationship but being two alpha males im not sure you could make it work lol

Non magical female Harry Potter?
Sounds like complete OC.

oh snap, Gibbs is going to be in for the shock of his life when he finds out about her being engaged and pregnant, I can't wait for the next chappie XD

omg so much drama adding up! i love it! and omg what's gonna happen when gibbs finds out she's engaged to Aaron and then that she's pregnant? ah, can't wait

okay i really like Jethro but i Adore Arron.
You really make me want to write a CM/HP fic! literally ADORES! I'm not even wanting her and Jethro to get back together, like it be nice if they could be friends but I'm totally for Arron.

Interesting Gibbs baby and Aaron steps up.
Wonder how Gibbs will reaction when told ... or if he figures it out.

that's kind of low of both of them and especially hotch when he has been cheated on and lied to by a significant other and I don't think she'll go through with it. I think she would tell Gibbs about the baby and demand am explanation. if she can stand up for herself in the field and to her ex why wouldn't she give him a piece of get mind and demand an explanation.

Oh my. Wow. Update soon.

Oh, no! Still can’t get over how stupid Gibbs is, as well. Does he really think somebody as hot as Ianthe would wait for him after the way he treated her?