Awesome..

This story is short, sure, but it is really good and deserves more reviews.

Whoa... that was beautiful! Short yet complete. I love the structure and development. The transitions from scene to scene are pretty smooth. The only parts that seemed sudden and slightly choppy were the timeskips, but it wasn’t too bad, and didn’t affect the story overall for me. Other than that, it’s all awesome!

I didn’t expect to get attached to the characters, despite the short length of the story. Seeing Zancrow’s story from his POV all the way from the beginning helps in showing us how his character developed over the years. His thirst for revenge is understandable, considering what happened to him and the state of their world... For all their lightheartedness and fooling around, the FT world is pretty damn bleak and a horrible place to live in.

That’s probably why the family feel of the Fairy Tail guild feels like a big thing, cause outside, the world sucks pretty bad.

But I think one of the points is also making the best of what you have, despite the horrible odds and lots life gives you, and that’s what I see in this Zancrow especially. He’s lived the hard life, but all throughout he’s just done the best he can, and rolls with it. It’s pretty amazing.

Damn wanted Zancrow to mention embarrassing stories about the young dragon slayers and explain how they came from the past

This is a surprisingly beautiful and touching story. Love how it has a happy ending. But what about the whole Zeref / Acnologia stuff? Have they already been dealt with? Or will that be something in the future? Anyways, thanks for a great read, and have a great weekend. :)

So I'm on a binge of your stories. They're really good..
But...

"their entirety of their forces might have been overrun or worse, decimated"

"decimate" does not mean what you think it means. It means to destroy a tenth of something. Obliterate, annihilate, eradicate, exterminate; are better options. You don't use any of them.

Really good story

awesome story with nice follow up

It's a good story

There are a shit ton of grammar errors :(

It's readable, but it's to the point where it feels like it was written by someone still in middle school. I can understand there is a planned out story and it has a muse, but with the middle school level grammar, it's a waste of my time. You could literally spend an extra ten minutes with some type of grammar software and fix most if not all of them. You don't even have to fix it yourself just look for red underlines and click on the words to fix them. It's that simple.

Great story enjoyed reading it

Glad Zan didn't die

Worthless nobles

That dark guild's timing sucks

Glad they are together again