| Reviews for Coming Home |
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  Guest chapter 9 . 6/7 Please continue. It is fairly interesting. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/16 I really like how it is progressing. Please continue. |
 618gnomes chapter 9 . 5/1/2019 Loved this chapter! Super good! |
| 618gnomes chapter 8 . 4/13/2019 While I'm not a fan of pinecest, wenpines isn't bad, and you write it really well. This is the first story like this I've read and it is actually really good! I'm interested to see how Wendy feels. |
| Josh Spicer chapter 9 . 4/10/2019 Reasons being that he's like two (three?) years younger than her and her best friend. Reasonable enough reasons to reason through. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 4/1/2019 loved Mabel working slowly for dipper and id say have Wendy fall for Mabel first so maybe Wendy can freak out over being in love with both pines twins and it might give Mabel more control moving forward. anyway, it's your story have fun with it. and great chapter looking forward to the next. |
| Josh Spicer chapter 8 . 4/2/2019 Mabel/Wendy by itself can even be easyish. It's the triple threat that brings up the difficulty. |
| johnnycatalina chapter 8 . 4/2/2019 Not a fan of Dipper and Mabel being together, but don’t mind Wenpines, if it’s done right. And so far, you’re doing a great job! I really want to see where this is going! Keep up the good work! |
| Masquerade man1234 chapter 7 . 3/25/2019 Really enjoyed this chapter, looking forward to the next. For my thoughts and questions for the story as a whole, look towards my comment for the previous chapter. |
| bezerkergod chapter 7 . 3/24/2019 it may not have gone the way you wanted but damm that was a great read can't wait for the next chapter |
| Josh Spicer chapter 7 . 3/24/2019 While I never go that far with my own sis (she's my best friend, also no we're good) I understand Dip's reasoning of "you're my sister." Like...yeah, pretty much sums it up right there. That being said, feels a smidge early for this so I'm expecting sadness next chapter. |
| Masquerade man1234 chapter 6 . 3/22/2019 Really enjoying this story and can’t wait for it to get another chapter. I just love polygamy stories ( assuming based on you couple tagging ). Will Wendy and Mable just be interested in Dipper, or are we going to see things get complicated between themselves as well. |
| Bfan chapter 6 . 3/21/2019 Nice story |
| bezerkergod chapter 6 . 3/19/2019 I really like the twins... progress toward dating and can't wait for the gut punch to Wendy when she figures it out. I'm really loving this story, thank you for writing it. |
| 618gnomes chapter 5 . 3/12/2019 Heh. Pretty good for being sick, man. I know I've done a lot worse while being sick, and this was a great chapter. |
