aw I miss this story so much ! i loved it

im dying she actually frikin broke his nose!XD
i loved it

This extra chapter was cute. Brought a smile to my face :) I’ll be looking out for the alternate version too

For some reason I'm getting Zaphod Beeblebrox vibes from Zalanoon? lol

So excited for your new story...I hope its a NaLu...this plotline is very unique and interesting...cant wait to read what your creative mind ours out

This little extra edition was cute 3 and re:82 that final excerpt explains a lot. I think this wrapped up very nicely :)

What an ending! All’s well that ends well. I’m super sad to see this story go—it was so good that I completed it in like 24 hours or so. You are very talented. I will be checking out your other work for sure, as well as the two chapters that follow this one ( I’m only commenting like this because this chapter implies it is the very end). Also, I hope all is well in your familial life and that your baby girl is doing okay!

Again, this story was really great. It took me through all the emotions and kept me on the edge of my seat at all times. Thanks for the great read. Cheers!

The heart ache continues. Lucy’s memories are so tender and sad. And the article she wrote was beautiful. I wish her friends could remember him too, but maybe that’s for the best.

Whole lot of heart ache over here. That moment at the end with Erza and Lucy was very sweet.

This is so intense! So much is happening. I can’t stop reading. I’m sad I’m almost at the end :/

What a heart breaking chapter. Your mind is killing me, yet I cannot stop reading.

Though I’m still mad at Loke, at least he’s coming clean...

That plot twist at the end just made my head hurt

This chapter hurt my heart so much! After they finally realized everything, it all came crashing down. I’m with Natsu, I want to fight everyone involved in this tragedy.

Leave it to Erza to give such great advice. Also, I like the info you added about Jellal’s heritage