"Please! I can't lose you...you raised me! You taught me how yo heal, patch, mend! You taught me how to defend myself, and stand up for myself. Please..."
'Jayfeather smiled solemnly, " I said those words when
leapool died. You'll move on."
"I DON'T WANT TO MOVE ON!" Alderheart screamed.

That part touched my heart. I cried for 30 min straight.
Jayfeather and Alderheart had a very close bond, and I can't bear to see them be separated. Overall, this and your other story "warriors high" made me cry. Five stars.

I AM NOT CRYING, YOUR CRYING.

Silently sobbing.

What? Lionblaze died? Flametail saw him? Alderheart is shorter than Jayfeather? I have so many questions, but however this is the best sequel! I was searching for Alderheart stories and this (along with the first story) was the only one that popped up, so I clicked on it... and I was rewarded greatly.

Amazing job on this, please keep up the good work! Are we going to see how Alderheart handles an apprentice?

This is INCREDIBLE. I love Half Moon and Jayfeather, and you captured them purrfectly! Awesome job

Oh my gosh... I'm freaking crying right now...

man havent cried in a long time and i tried sad songs pain mental pain but this touched me deep down that my favorite two where Adderheart and Jayfeather just damn the words just hit me when he said "im leaving Adderheart" like damn

Very good! I love those two!

I need a sequel to this. So touching
Happy Valentine’s Day (a day late but who cares)

Damn dude this was really touching. Happy Valentines day to you.

Super cute! I ship them so hard!