Honestly might do better if this was on spacebattles

Some grammatical and capitalization errors.

i wonder how would batman react to barbatos or dr simon hurt

Good chapter. Can't wait for the next one.

What is up with your lack of capitalization?

please. please. please. please. please, continue!

Please, for the love of all that is holy, PROOFREADING EXISTS! Soooo many spelling errors, capitalization mistakes, and just overall grammar errors. I love these kind of fics, but yours is borderline unreadable because of this.

I wonder how they would react to Savitar? Or the descriptions of the Endless, specifically Death. It should be interesting to see.

"I'll kill you to death!" Stupid Bitch Pansy.

Continúe superboy prime

holy shit the grammar is atrocious

Superboy prime doomsday darkseid anti monitor nekron parallax

So boring

Could there be a chapter about Artemis' alternate? I'd love to see how her and the team react to that. Also, there should be chapters where they don't view an episode, and help each other process what they learn. Especially, for Wally right now. He should definitely be having an existential crisis right about now.

I wanted to read the story so much but there are way too many grammatical errors that I found it impossible to read. I'm going to try to read the next chapter but if I come across the same problems I'm not going to read anymore.