Intresting story
Sad that there's are no new chapters to read

...i'm guessing a poor attempt at a self insert as shirou seeing as you're constantly switching back and forth between first and 3rd person when it comes to shirou as you're using first person pronouns instead of shirou's name

it's okay he used more nerves than circuits anyway

Продолжение!

I'm out. Peace.

since you asked, I wont read it

ILYA is in love with her brother or is this a diffrent timeline?

HAHAHAHAHAHA

Don't read this it's not worth your time. It's so rushed that its not even funny.

First of all, install grammarly. Second, when there is more then one magus, its magi, not maguses. Third, why the fuck does everyone ignore Shirous and Illiyas names? "My name is eastern and my Sister name is western and also sound like a name of a noble" and nobody asks how it is possible. Fourth, why did they give their full names while everyone else gave only their first names? Fifth, why cant they reveal their magic? They can just say its a Teigu. Especially if they dont show everything they can do. Also, in the first chapter Esdeath knew about the strange blades and Shirous other bullshit, so why did he not call him out on that during or after the fight.

Im done. This story is a fucking mess.

This is retarded. Shirou doesnt respect the law cause of his belief in it, he tries not to break it cause it may lead to conflict and unneeded human suffering. He has no reason to surrender here, especially knowing what people say about Esdeath and cause of her stinking of others blood. He already knows that the system is heavily corrupted, so even if Esdeath wasnt a corrupt cruel bitch (what are the chances), someone under her command or one of her superriors is 100% a corrupt asshole. Also, he didnt even show his strength or character and he already stole her heart? Bullshit.

Ending it worst than canon? That's just bull. Tatsumi still died and Shirou crippled himself for no reason. Even without his intervention, Emperor Robot would still be destroyed. But now he can't Trace anymore. That's like Harry Potter losing his magic or Naruto without Chakra.

Up up up up up up up up up up

Great chapter. I loved it but it was also kind of confusing. Please make a chapter to explain what the hell happened while they were gone.

yep, better get it done rather than making it a hiatus one.

lot of people are going to be more satisfied by that (including my self :D).