The chapter is over ... It was cool! I like this subject, Ash in this complicated situation ... Hmm, I'm curious to know when he will tell his secret to his Pokémon. Do not delay updating kkkk brinks s2
(primeira vez em que comento uma história daqui, woww ;-;)

Wow I am glad ash got away for those spearow again and how Pikachu saved him again and how he saw ho oh again and I wonder when he is going to use his powers

Yea ash got his first Pokémon and got Pikachus respect and friendship

Hey, welcome. So look a warning given you are writing a Pokemon story. Farla, St Elmo's Fire, Talarc, Spencer841, and a few others are known bullies on this site who review only to destroy stories and promote drama.

They will push their believes down your throat, demand you redo your story to fit their wants and no, they are the super minority and hated by the fandom. They also tend to post pms publicly so responding to them is ill advised.

They start off with a disclaimer about honestly thinking it would help. It doesn't they want you to be screwed over as they complain about trival nonsense that got their panties in a twist.

They think Pokemon is slavery. That you should capitalize the way they want. Oh, and they give out false dialogue formatting. Don't get me started on Arceus.

Oh and if they say that they are being bullied. Know that they are lying as they been doing it too this fandom for years now and are just pissed that a group are working to stop it. The admins told them to knock it off.

If that's not enough on my profile is proof its utter nonsense. oh and if there is a guest reviewer titled "Take Down Hybrid" know that is's actually Unique Yet Sensible the biggest of all of Farla's supporters and an utter troll who only doing this shit because Hybrid gave her criticism. The girls gone off the deep end and into complete insanity.

Speaking of them they had twice agreed to stop but don't. Even after being told to stop by the admins, their friends, and even random strangers. Right now they are somehow convienced that Hybrid, a woman, is a man.

Best to remove it.