Personally, this story is good, like a lot of the other fanfics out there, this fanfic has an interesting setup I hope you may continue this at a later date, even if takes another year or so

please continue it!.. don't change your story give punishment to demon

plsss update soon I can't wait!

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i really hope that you update this story soon

you need to continue this fic man... really good

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I hope you intend to give Tolkien credit for using his song in this fic.

Words cannot describe how a dumb fuck such as you DID NOT extract the sacred gear from Issei. Are you prorecting hom so that the plot can move the same as cannon?

Good story but can you do some actual consistency:/...naruto stayed out of human affairs for centuries then when he meets issie he wants to help him...he hates demons and devils with a passion yet spares issei...and theres the whole...he comes to people says they can trust him and they eat it easily...it shows in the way issei let him take him to the forest...and entering the club room...despite clearly not even dressing in uniform

Ya the whole issei thing is dumb he's not that type of person issei is a weakling pervert who got saved by plot please don't say that issei is like Naruto cause he will never be like that Honestly fuck issei he was always useless nothing special except the BG you wanna fuck him over release DDraig and Albion and recruit them haha

WE WANT MORE NOW PLZ

I'm confused on how you want to reconcile issei becoming a devil with naruto's values. Issei in the anime is quite frankly the worst possible "protagonist" to align with the good book. There are way better characters to be naruto's champion then issei

wow, your history is amazing