Omg omg omg pls update!.!6/?!/7/?/?/ I need more shinsou!22!/9-87/77/

I’m really glad I read this storyyyy! One thing I’m questioning is that if Ume is able to change the molecular structure of both inorganic and organic material, shouldn’t she be able to literally raise the dead from their ashes? Either way, ahhhhh thank you!

Eeeeee pretty interesting so far... I really like how most characters are in character but I think shinsou and bakugou are a lil ooc. I feel like shinsou wouldn’t outright admit his quirk and somehow say it in like a sardonic way but yeah. Bakugou is legit like funny. Like those cute Pomeranian dogs that just bark all day but like cuddle. Love this story so far!

Why do I have this weird feeling that her aunt’s husband is like Aizawa... lmaooo this is such a good chapter omg! I’m in loveeeeee :3

I have a question: if Ume can turn people(/objects) into dust, why can’t she turn them back? Would they just be dead bodies? Dust is molecules too, and seeing that she can control molecules in the air I don’t understand why she’ can’t revert things from dust into the another state of matter? Such as a s solid human body again?

Brooooo this story goes so hard, I wish it was the real anime omg. An interesting, well written OC, you’re an amazing writer.

New reader here and oh ghaaaad! One of the best BNHA OC Stories that I've ever read so far. I'm amazed how you wrote this!
I love Ume. I can totally relate her at someways and asdfghjkl I'm speechless. I've been binge reading this and I can say that I'm glad I found this story.
I'm so excited at what will happen next. I'm looking forward for this and I hope it was not abandoned.

Aaaa Bakugo should just admit to himself that he's jealous! hahahaha but seriously, you depict Bakugo's true character here. He's not OOC.

Once again, I really really love this story. It had a great potential.
I hope you're okay tho! In the midst of pandemic, wear a mask and always wash your hands. Take care of yourself and I hope you'll comeback and update this again! Good luck! Fighting!

This has been an emotional roller-coaster, AMAZING! I LOVE IT! YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER! I really ship her with Bakugou, but the chemistry between her and Kirishima and Shinso is just so... mwah! WELL DONE

Well shit. This is like... I don’t know how to describe it. It’s good, at the very least. It’s just right. Not the perfect story, but a very, very good one. One of the best I’ve read in a while. Intriguing relationship dynamics, a flawed character who’s emotionally constipated to the point where you just want to give her a hug, and... yeah. Also, I think Ume’s mother and their relationship is beautifully written. Also, the thought of Bakugo and Ume makes me all warm inside. Also, I think this is pretty great. Also, did I mention this is amazing? Like oh my god. I can rant about how good this is. Not Marshmellowtime tier, but not that far behind it.

Great story. Hope it stays this way.

What the duck was this chapter.

What the actual duck was this chapter.

My brain is short circuiting from the sheer amount of relationship development—

I’m not angry, though. I’m really happy.

But if I were to describe this chapter in three words, they’d beShit goes down.”

Great chapter, but I really feel that if I was in Ume’s shoes, I probably wouldn’t of blurted everything out at once. Maybe dropped a bit of her past, like, keeping how her quirk destroyed things and leaving it at that. That way, they could still feel the connection all while keeping the information spilled at a minimum.

Also, just realized I forgot to mention that this is for her scene with Midoriya.

Great chapter, loving Ume’s relationship dynamics, keep it up!

I’m curious, can ume also use her quirk like Overhaul? As in, can she actively move the things she uses her quirk on or are they limited in that regards?

I just got done binge reading this story and I absolutely love is and I really hope that you will update it soon!

I'm loving the solid OC character - she's a believable person, with believable personality traits coming from something that is very possible. I love the description of Momo, mature, sophisticated, and yet that eager, teenage bubbliness that she has. I'm very interested to see where this goes!

Sweet quirk, and to be honest more versatile than momo's. The mom is a cunt