A lot of repetition when describing the minotaurs and you couldn't keep the paragraphs consistent for them. Each minotaur should have had just one paragraph for themselves.

Seems like an interesting story so far though.

Wait wait wait. What the fuck is going on here? Where did he get Jūbi powers from and why does he act like a fuckboy Sasuke? You have him talking to people with this lady rubbing all on him, like why. I would be uncomfortable asf

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You killed danzo too quickly you should've given him a slower more painful death.

great chapter.

Excellent work dude.

Not only is Artemis is Naruto's true mother but now you bring Fleur Delacour his otp into this BEST STORY EVER.

honestly if people use the word order to you I wouldn't listen and if you want to talk just pm me I already chat with a few authors when they are stressed why not another but that tangent aside I do hope you continue I love your story but I'm not going to push and stress you out

- Armityle? Oh yeah, I forgot he has the Sacred Beasts, so it's logical Armityle is no different.
- Seeing people trying and failing to get Naruto for their agendas always amuses me. Especially if they are from Konoha.
- Yeah, Miia and Smith have most of the fault. I would lean more towards Smith, but that's just me.

Hmm, seems Naruto is having fun and got rid of some pests anyways keep up the great work!

Perfect and update soon please

Cool chapter continue please.

Para cuando el prox cap

you left out smiths name twice in the first paragraph

Please, for the love of all things right in this world, FIX YOUR GRAMMAR. This is causing a headache just by seeing all the mistakes. Only a quarter of the way through the first chapter, and I can confidently say that I haven’t read anything this bad in a while.