| Reviews for Tend the Demon |
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   Kosmish chapter 6 . 6/29 i need to defeat baldur quickly... precedents to lecture him about life for an hour... defeats thor in 3 seconds... takes hours for two demigods... defeats thor in 3 seconds... gets his wings ripped out by baldur. u must be the stupidest writer on this site, how the fuck do you make any sense with this fucking story? |
| Kosmish chapter 7 . 6/29 ur pathetic... natsu faces great red in his prime? and can barely defeat a norse god? wtf i’m i reading? ur story is stupid asf... pls stop writing |
| midnightscar17 chapter 7 . 5/20 Loki |
| HeroLuffy726 chapter 3 . 1/15 Natsu comes off as a bit of a d-bag, and more than a little racist. For all he talks of the devils arrogance and sense of superiority, he has it far worse than them from what we've seen so far. |
| rufus264 chapter 7 . 12/12/2019 Great chapter nice end to the chapter |
| ProfesorGoblitz chapter 6 . 12/12/2019 I am pretty sure natsu’s flames can BURN magic, a simple curse that makes the god immortal really wouldn’t do much, since I am pretty sure Natsu is stronger than kratos |
| ProfesorGoblitz chapter 7 . 12/12/2019 I am starting to dislike this fanfic |
| TheOnlyKing chapter 7 . 12/12/2019 Awesome chapter, thanks for updating but please have a way for him to get his wings back. The ability of Flight in battle is a great advantage (Although now that I think about it wings aren't always needed for flight) but still, it would suck if he's stuck for the rest of eternity with ripped up wings. |
| Wacko12 chapter 1 . 10/20/2019 pretty sure Rizevim is Lucifer's son, not grandson |
| Loke13 chapter 6 . 7/9/2019 Very good |
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/2/2019 I love your story but I wish that you only had one girl that natsu loves instead of having many since having one or none would give more mystery to Natsu's character as we as more loyalty for the one he does love. update soon |
| bl0eha000o chapter 6 . 7/4/2019 first thor then his sons and now baldur? damn those were some good fight scenes! i really like them, i wonder how the fight will go with baldur, i'm curious about that. also, what is natsu going to do with thor's eye? and, there have been previous mentions of the beast of the underworld, i want to know about that as well. hopefully in the near future chapters there will be more hints about it. i'm definately looking forward to the next chapter! |
| bl0eha000o chapter 5 . 7/4/2019 i cannot complain with that lemon you wrote, that was good. it took up most of the chapter and i hope there is more in the future so that it shows natsu is cementing his relationship with his girls. |
| bl0eha000o chapter 4 . 7/4/2019 ooh some intimate moments between natsu and his girls, i'm so looking forward to the next chapter! |
| bl0eha000o chapter 3 . 7/4/2019 i really like the dialogue between the characters, it's very clear to see who is saying what. since in some other fanfic's that i have favourited so far, some of the dialogue's are in big chunks of text. also, that incantation for the revival, i do hope like realllllllyyyyyy hope that there will be some use of that in the future |
