Been reading this for a bit. I'm always willing to try an AU with a different start to affairs. I mean, I WROTE a story like that, so why wouldn't I?

It's been okay thus far, though I admit I kinda wish there was more original concepts and encounters to make this feel more like a different story to the canon. But, again, got my own fic I'm writing, so chalk that one up to inherent bias.

Wasn't especially interested in learning about Fire Dragon Slayer magic in one big training segment. I kinda wish you'd spaced it out more. I recall my time doing sports, where we'd spend entire practices just doing drills and learning one, maybe two moves and then practicing them for a few days before learning more. That in mind, it feels like Lisanna took to her new magic little too quickly. I kinda wish there had been some stumbles, some points where she didn't get the spell right. On the flip side, it's nice to get all that stuff out of the way to justify the Nali scene where they hilariously yet romantically feed each other fire.

Finally, the reason I felt compelled to leave a review: the conversation between Erza and Mira. These are two people with a mutual dislike for each other stretching back YEARS. People like that, in an environment as rowdy and wild as Fairy Tail, have probably done some unneighborly things to each other. Seeing them just hash it out and get over it, without needing time to adjust or apologize for any specific incidents, just feels contrived. Yeah, they're both into Natsu, but that doesn't mean they can change on a dime, nor does it mean the thing which drove them to dislike each other are suddenly gone.

Now, if this were the START of making amends, where they agree to try to get along but need time to learn how to do that, it would've felt much more real. That's actually a piece of storytelling advice (from pro wreslter Al Snow, no less) that I'm now trying to follow: "If it were real, how would it go?" The first half of the conversation felt real, especially with Cana playing arbitrator to Mira and Erza's sniping, but the second half lost me. I'll see how it goes in the next few chapters.

Never afraid to read one of your fanfictions because I k ow they are some of the best. Keep it up and stay safe during these troublesome time. For your Naruto series, if your muse died, then you could ask your friends ir family on how you think you should continue, it always nice to ask an outside source you are familiar with when writing stories. Stay safe, peace out!

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Heh, called it...

great chapter.

idk if to be surprised at how odd or think yeah that make sense she became an alcoholic dragon slayer cana is a big drinker

ohh going dragonkin slaying again but a big threat

well wyrm probably tougher meat being under ground the pressure digging constantly using it body muscles so more blood flow also it a rock wyrm so the meat would be harder still
so it make good jerky ration or intense and long slow cooking to soften the meat for good roast or stew for a firm but tender meat not the melt in you mouth kind i bet
but it probably still great as dragon and its kin taste great

Nice chapter keep up the good work

Dang, you'd think Fiore could go one week without something big happening... oh wait, it's Earthland. Something Big happens on days ending in 'y'. LOLZ!
So... Booze Dragon... Alternatively, it's close to a Water Element as much as an Earth Element, even considering the derivative of a derivative. Just saying...

Excellent update and Cana bring s booze dragon slayer fits her to a T.

Finally we'll some action, no offense but the Wyverns weren't rely interesting.

I'm really excited for the next chapter hope it co. es out soon

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

How long till we get to cannon? Where Lucy is introduced and becomes a slayer? Curious to know what element she becomes!

Then we will have Natsu and the girls on a mission together.
PS: I wonder what kind of Dragon Slayer ULTEAR will be when it's her turn.

Uh makorov could hold acnologia down for a few seconds, pretty sure he could wrangle a giant rock snake single handedly. I was more interested in seeing natsu solo it with his elemental advantage.

Idk when the new series introduced those 5th gen dragon slayers but now esoteric elements don't seem that esoteric anymore. Though how old is cana that shes already acquired a taste for alcohol?

Regardless enjoyed the chapter, thanks for the read!

Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next and it is interesting what her element is and how she will have a actual reason to carry alcohol around with her

introduce story cant wait to read the next chapter