Reviews for More Human Than Machine (Bee x Charlie) |
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zombleangel chapter 8 . 7/19 Amazing chapter! I do have a question, wouldn't Bee's humanoid form be the same thing as his holoform? Just wondering. I can not wait for the next chapter. |
zombleangel chapter 7 . 5/13 AWWWWWWWW! Such a cute chapter. I can not wait for the next chapter to come out. |
Guest chapter 6 . 4/18 Update please |
zombleangel chapter 6 . 4/9 Wow just wow. What an awesome chapter. I can not wait for the next chapter to come out. I wonder what will happen next. |
zombleangel chapter 5 . 4/9 What a moving chapter. Charlie kissed Bee, and people say that men are supposed to make the first move, yeah right! As I was reading I noticed a couple of misspells - we use to listen to this... mainly sadness; somehow the sentences that are separated look odd. I hope that helps. I can not wait to read the next chapter |
zombleangel chapter 4 . 4/9 A short but sweet chapter. I did notice one thing as I was reading: is the VW beetle, is it some kind of disguise. should be- Is the VW beetle some kind of disguise? |
zombleangel chapter 3 . 4/9 Great chapter. As I was reading I noticed a couple misspells, they are as follows: 1- he was bald hat she wasn't mad at him - bald hat should be bad but she wasn't mad at him. 2 -... as she starters - should be as she started... I hope that helps |
zombleangel chapter 2 . 4/8 Cool chapter. I wonder what will happen next |
zombleangel chapter 1 . 4/8 Such a cute chapter |
Autobot-Wolfsketch chapter 4 . 11/11/2019 I like the story bumblebee and Charlie is one of my favorite new transformer pairing but this idea is a very interesting concept I always start of a cybertronian having a holoform but not actually turning into the human themselves that's a very interesting concept indeed can't wait for the next chapter. |
Chaotic Deathmen chapter 4 . 8/31/2019 Damn this is really turning out to be a favourite of mine can't wait to see what's next. keep up the brilliant work mate :) |
Guest chapter 4 . 6/2/2019 Next chapter please |
Guest chapter 4 . 4/13/2019 Great story. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
Guest chapter 3 . 4/11/2019 Chapter 4 please |
Guest chapter 3 . 3/26/2019 Next chap |