Reviews for More Human Than Machine (Bee x Charlie)
zombleangel chapter 8 . 7/19
Amazing chapter!
I do have a question, wouldn't Bee's humanoid form be the same thing as his holoform?
Just wondering.
I can not wait for the next chapter.
zombleangel chapter 7 . 5/13
AWWWWWWWW! Such a cute chapter.
I can not wait for the next chapter to come out.
Guest chapter 6 . 4/18
Update please
zombleangel chapter 6 . 4/9
Wow just wow. What an awesome chapter.
I can not wait for the next chapter to come out. I wonder what will happen next.
zombleangel chapter 5 . 4/9
What a moving chapter.

Charlie kissed Bee, and people say that men are supposed to make the first move, yeah right!

As I was reading I noticed a couple of misspells - we use to listen to this... mainly sadness; somehow the sentences that are separated look odd.
I hope that helps.
I can not wait to read the next chapter
zombleangel chapter 4 . 4/9
A short but sweet chapter.

I did notice one thing as I was reading: is the VW beetle, is it some kind of disguise. should be- Is the VW beetle some kind of disguise?
zombleangel chapter 3 . 4/9
Great chapter.
As I was reading I noticed a couple misspells, they are as follows:
1- he was bald hat she wasn't mad at him - bald hat should be bad but she wasn't mad at him.
2 -... as she starters - should be as she started...

I hope that helps
zombleangel chapter 2 . 4/8
Cool chapter.
I wonder what will happen next
zombleangel chapter 1 . 4/8
Such a cute chapter
Autobot-Wolfsketch chapter 4 . 11/11/2019
I like the story bumblebee and Charlie is one of my favorite new transformer pairing but this idea is a very interesting concept I always start of a cybertronian having a holoform but not actually turning into the human themselves that's a very interesting concept indeed can't wait for the next chapter.
Chaotic Deathmen chapter 4 . 8/31/2019
Damn this is really turning out to be a favourite of mine can't wait to see what's next. keep up the brilliant work mate :)
Guest chapter 4 . 6/2/2019
Next chapter please
Guest chapter 4 . 4/13/2019
Great story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/11/2019
Chapter 4 please
Guest chapter 3 . 3/26/2019
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