Thanks for sharing this story, it’s such a pity you don’t feel like continuing it, for I feel it’s like ending in front of nowhere. I absolutely adore this pair so if you decide to write more, I’ll definitely read them!

Really great! I loved it. Thank you for sharing!

Hi,
for making this little story your first FF, you've done really well.
Somehow I suspected that the mysterious savior is someone we know well. Still, you did well to surprise her. I like this pairing a lot and wish it had been continued.
If you have any more ideas for Lumiones, please write them down. I'm sure I'll read them too.

This was good. If you ever decide to expand on it, I would read it.

well Japon through your eyes is certainly nice, I love the country,as I lived there many years. this one shot needs more chapter, will Lucius find his family? ? will he meet again with Hermione? ? so many questions which need to be answer. bravo for your lovely work

Nice little piece. Two people alone, each with secrets. Harry Potter fanfic is rife with unlikely pairings, but this was one of the most imaginative I've read. You really shouldn't stop at one.

This was an interesting story.