Reviews for A Little Observation
Lunaliceazreal chapter 1 . 1/13
I really liked this story and I hope you continue it! Also will you ever be updating draw blood, just a drop ? It’s such a good story and I can’t seem to forget about it!
Zaffra chapter 1 . 12/20/2019
One of the best ff i've evere read on Marineford. Please, continue it. I'm curious to see how it ends
Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2019
Good story.
FanficFanatics26 chapter 1 . 8/29/2019
Awww this is magnificent! Omg I wanted Ace to live so bad! And ps is there a continuation l? A vignettes? Or oneshots?
vaporeonxglaceon chapter 1 . 6/29/2019
... i'm speachless, this thing of beauty is just... wow, i love it.
GreenDrkness chapter 1 . 5/24/2019
Nah this doesn't need it a sequel it's quite solid on its own
Awww Ace prioritized keeping his little brother safe over his need to stay and fight #sibling goals
PheonixQueen15 chapter 1 . 5/17/2019
This is awesome! I adore Ace lives stories!
Sofia Du Ciar chapter 1 . 4/9/2019
LOVE IIIITTTT !
ChiakiAngel chapter 1 . 4/5/2019
This AU definitely has potential, but ending it here is also a good decision. It leaves open to the imagination what else could have happened. I thoroughly enjoyed getting a different take on how Ace could be saved. Thanks for writing this gem!
almp15 chapter 1 . 3/9/2019
I really want to see Ace's reaction when Hancock follows her beloved!
sess18 chapter 1 . 3/6/2019
Please continue! This is one plot I really want to read.
ladopa chapter 1 . 3/2/2019
I like this :) it was very well written and a legit way for Ace to be saved. I hope you do continue, you dont have to do much of course but I would appreciate a chapter on them surviving. Thank you for the nice read
PenChills chapter 1 . 2/28/2019
This is great and i would love to read the continuation of this. Thanks for the story!
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 1 . 2/25/2019
A very well thought and believable way to keep Ace alive :-) That Luffy did so well surviving Akainu was a little stretched, but given how much he has proven to be a prodigy at Observation Haki in canon it still works. Nice job :-D
lknjsadoi chapter 1 . 2/25/2019
Pretty nice imo. I'd say if anything it could be made into a two-shot about what happened after but definitely not a full on story since that would be basically the same as the original with slight changes which would ruin it. Making it stay a one-shot leaves it to the imagination about if the WBP survived and what happened next so I'd say it was a good idea to leave it at that.
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