Okay I must admit. My Beta senses were tingling while reading this. Two words can accurately describe this: Utterly horrific. You need to work on you spelling and grammar. Don't be afraid to change 'it is cool' to 'it's cool'. It's easier to read. Also, never start a sentence with 'And', 'But', 'Or' and a few other things including: Never put a comma before 'and'. My rant is now, mostly, over. I could pester you about every little detail that you ruined in relation to the story. Also, better plot points, work on them.

Amazing story update soon.

Really good so far, I wish Natsu would shut Erza up though, that arrogance can get her kille— Oh wait she almost was.. by Natsu, Mira’s areogance is one of the traits Natsu likes about her so that can be overlooked, I like that both Natsu and Mira have crushes on each other too, I do hope they get more intimate though, keep up the great work

Gotta nope out because the writing needs improvement.

A great story, keep up the good work.

Please update soon

Natsu is some boring over power gary-stu. Who would want to read this?

Another great chapter can’t wait to see chapter five.

Ha fuck you gray and the girls’

Great chapter keep up the good work

Jeez. I don’t even remember when I started reading this fix, but it’s pretty good and so far does what many other fics attempt to do, but better. Just one question, in the line where it says he got that scar in a fight with his dad or “brother” Gajeel, which one is it? Did he fight his dad or Gajeel? Or did he fight Gajeel’s dad?

Amazing chapter keep it up. Can’t wait for the next one

lowkey pissed at Erza's and Mira's behavior. but at least Natsu destroyed them at the end...

It's a pretty good story so far, there are some grammatical errors that I saw in the previous and present chapter. They can be easily fixed. Also, some basic sentences can be improved as well

Great chapter