Reviews for Steven and Eve
foxchick1 chapter 2 . 11/29/2019
Excited to see what happens next.
spacerswap chapter 1 . 10/27/2019
plz continue
foxchick1 chapter 1 . 9/7/2019
Curious to see what happens next,
TheLatiKing chapter 2 . 6/27/2019
Oh that sucks one of your cats running away from home feel your pain hope you feel better soon and I’m still looking forward to this
TheLatiKing chapter 1 . 6/21/2019
I wonder if Eve will be like the Vee in the pokemon manga and be able to change to its evolved forms and back whenever it wants to without the pain of course and the need of stones as well. To evolve the first time requirements need to be met since there are no stones on earth so the use of the environment would be a good substitute like for Vaporeon Eve the situation with Lapis would be excellent for that or for Jolteon inside a powerplant or Flareon a volcano or the forge with Bismuth etc. That would make this story even more interesting to me also space your paragraphs more, please. Eve learning telepathy would be cool a Zorua did it can't see why an Eevee can't perhaps after she evolves into an Espeon she would gain the ability for all her forms.
SilverWolf1130 chapter 1 . 4/24/2019
Amazing so far. Keep it up! You’ve got a follow and favorite from me! Sorry I’m a little late to this but I hope you continue. I guess you could say I’ve certainly found a rare gem (snickers)

Because of the name, I hold some doubt this Eevee will evolve, but I hope it evolves into an Espeon because Steven is a little sunshine and Eevee evolves into Espeon during the day with high friendship and the gem on its head makes it fit in more with the world of Steven Universe (plus with Telepathy, they can talk to Steven) and we know Steven is fond of pink cats later on (Lion, you know)
Galaxies2007 chapter 1 . 3/7/2019
MOAR MOAR MOAR
SunMoon6798 chapter 1 . 3/6/2019
Hey, welcome. So look a warning given you are writing a Pokemon story. Farla, St Elmo's Fire, Talarc, Spencer841, and a few others are known bullies on this site who review only to destroy stories and promote drama.

They will push their believes down your throat, demand you redo your story to fit their wants and no, they are the super minority and hated by the fandom. They also tend to post pms publicly so responding to them is ill advised.

They start off with a disclaimer about honestly thinking it would help. It doesn't they want you to be screwed over as they complain about trival nonsense that got their panties in a twist.

They think Pokemon is slavery. That you should capitalize the way they want, fyi Pokemon names are not species names and that's been officially recongized in modern English. So yes it's correct yo capitalize Pikachu for instance. Oh, and they give out false dialogue formatting. Don't get me started on Arceus.

Oh and if they say that they are being bullied. Know that they are lying as they been doing it too this fandom for years now and are just pissed that a group are working to stop it. The admins told them to knock it off.

If that's not enough on my profile is proof its utter nonsense. oh and if there is a guest reviewer titled "Take Down Hybrid" know that is's actually Unique Yet Sensible the biggest of all of Farla's supporters and an utter troll who only doing this shit because Hybrid gave her criticism. The girls gone off the deep end and into complete insanity.

Best to remove it.

Speaking of them they had twice agreed to stop but don't. Even after being told to stop by the admins, their friends, and even random strangers. Right now they are somehow convinced that Hybrid, a woman, is a man.

If they claim they have proof don't. Its all utter nonsense and they been told by the admins to take it down.

Furthermore, if some goes on about us spaming accounts or something know its likely juat another troll so block them.
Inkaliber chapter 1 . 2/28/2019
It’s neat, but you’ll probably have to divide the paragraphs a little more. They’re kind of lengthy and a little exhausting to read. Other than that the story has potential.