Reviews for Displaced
hirshja chapter 9 . 6/15
Goddamn it Blake. You know damn well that Carmine knows what their plans are. Investigations aren’t needed. She’s literally just making plans to force them into a situation they can’t escape from.
Guest chapter 9 . 6/15
Dang it Blake, you've got a time traveler from the FUTURE, who says they know exactly what the White Fang is planning. What, exactly, do you expect to uncover via investigating that wasn't already done so? Especially since, you know, your own Future Self would have been doing the same investigation you are?
Dragon lord Syed 101 chapter 9 . 6/15
Good now Jaune knows his past oh no this isn’t going to be good at all
Guest chapter 2 . 6/1
There's mention of Future!Ruby's eyeS there in the chapter. Really should be singular, considering that she only has the one now.
Sm0keyPanda chapter 8 . 5/17
Ayyy, nice to see a chapter for this. I was beginning to worry that it was abandoned. Love the chapter, and I really am looking forward to more. I love this concept, and it's a genuine shame that the only good fics that use it are all abandoned, except this one.
JamiSapphire chapter 8 . 5/17
This is an excellent story and I've read all the chapters. Keep up the excellent work!
Six02 chapter 2 . 5/17
Yo this is really neat, I can't wait to see more.
Dragon lord Syed 101 chapter 8 . 5/17
good chapter so we are going to the island next I hope Future Jaune and Carmine meet and I'm sorry to hear about your Depression
Devashish Karatolios chapter 7 . 5/8
even with the several cliches i find often in rwby time travel fanfics, this is still one of the best i've read. please update soon, and I hope you are doing well.
Devashish Karatolios chapter 3 . 5/8
so why is it that every time Ruby gets brought backwards in time, she is in love with Blake and all her friends except Jaune are dead. literally, I've read nearly five dozen of these, 60 stories, and every last one of them is like this.
Nagaichi chapter 7 . 2/9
Looking forward to seeing more!
ranjira1988 chapter 7 . 2/4
HEH. that boy Roman maybe now you wont end up was Grimm Bait XD
AMW Riptide chapter 7 . 1/28
Ahh I love this so much
JackTheSpades chapter 7 . 1/28
"Roman and Neo are delights to write" yet no Neo far and wide...
Kinda disappointed that the "bloody" part of the story got scraped here. I'd like to know pure and innocent Ruby's thoughts if she knew her future self was plotting to kill someone in cold blood. (I mean, obviously Cinder deserves it but still).
So yeah, glad this story is back. Love myself some time travel . Hope to see more soon.
hirshja chapter 6 . 1/27
Heh, let’s be real here, if tarasque is anything like his namesake, they don’t need any others.
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