Loved it :)

I almost wish you had continued the trend to end each chapter with food lines haha! Very nicely done for your first story! It's worlds better than my first!

Adorable!

Ahhhh. So sweet... I loved it. The last part made me smile with warmth flooding thru me. I loved that Marinette revealed herself finally. I loved a hurt Chat. Guess I'm a sucker for angst. I loved the kwamis and your characterization. And you even made me cry. I felt so bad for Marinette feeling she was responsible for Chats injuries. Very very nicely done

Awwww, this is so sweet! I really enjoyed this reveal and the whole story :D

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I loved this. Perfect.

This was such a cute story! It was all perfect and I can soo imagine all of this happening in the real show! It would be so great! I hope to read a lot more of your amazing stories in the future!

Fun reveal! As well written as the rest of your lovely stories. Thank you for sharing it!

Of course Alya was listening at the door. But I love the one-on-one with Nino; and the complex, turbulent emotions Adrien is dealing with - not quite seeing the "why" as yet but possibly starting to see the bigger picture. I like the way you use Nino and Alya like a Greek Chorus - helping to fill in the blanks and prod our Adrien into the right direction. On to Chapter Three!

I am catching up on my backlog. What a great start! I love how you write these characters... I can see Marinette hyperventilating. And she is smart enough to put two and two together. On to Chapter Two!

Sweetest fluff ever! Thank you xx

Awww! That last line though. Marinette will always be protective of her kitty.

I love the story. I love the reveal. And I love your explanation about the Miraculous cure.

WOW. I had no clue this was going to be that amazing. This was absolutely creative, I haven't heard of a similar reveal. it was so cute and tender and warm. 10/10. Easily one of the best short stories I've read.

-Icarus

Finally, It was really a good chapter.

Finally the reveal.

Now that they know their identities they will be able to cover each other's backs and they will be much closer.

I wonder how will Gabriel react that the Miraculous Cure is not perfect, the fact that it was his son who paid the prize should be interpreted as a warning from the Universe.