Reviews for Control
heralderofspringtime chapter 24 . 10/5
I was really enjoying Bella realizing that Edward was bad news. But, not sure about Jake and the whole twin flames thing.
sarah0406 chapter 24 . 10/2
This is very good. Any story where Bella ends up choosing herself before choosing anyone else is good! I’m hoping to see more of that story soon.
FreckledWolf chapter 24 . 9/19
Nikki,
I am not sure why this got such bad feed back. It is one of a kind and I haven't read anything remotely similar which is a breath of fresh air. It's rare to stumble upon a story that is one of a kind. I absolutely love the story line and the plot. It is keeping on my toes as well as making me root for not only Bella and Jacob, but the entire wolf pack as their amazingly unique connection could do wonders for them. Bella was able to help herself and find her strength with the help of Charlie. This Story also supports a father and daughter relationship you don't see in most of the stories. It paints Charlie in a very good light and I think more stories need that. . I hope beyond hope that you find the courage and will to come back to this story and finish it. I know I for one would love reading and I am sure others would too. If anyone ever asked me about a suggested Jacob and Bella story it would be this one.
With Lots of Love and Encouragement,
FreckledWOlf
Izzyx7 chapter 24 . 8/28
Is there any hope that this story is going to continue? I LOVED it so much. Bella being empowered and Charlie acting like an involved parent, not to mention the spin on Jacob and Bella's relationship. It doesn't move too fast without getting boring.
I dont know if you're still upset about the troll or if you just aren't into writing this anymore but I assure you that you're gonna make a lot of people very happy if you continue the story.
Izzy chapter 1 . 8/18
I hope you continew this story,is realy good first straight couple update soon .thank's.i don't like bella in book and movie ,she is selfish who used remaind me my i love bella in you story .thank 's for share
shadowkissed-reign chapter 24 . 7/17
Please update. This is one of the best Jacob/Bella stories I've read in ages, and I'd love to see where the story goes.
Puddleduck85 chapter 24 . 5/29
This is amazing please write more...
Navywife07 chapter 24 . 5/14
Please update I want to know what happens next
Kemq chapter 24 . 4/29
Great story. I hope you finish it some day.
JRSDH1 chapter 24 . 4/23
this is amazing! i absolutely adore it! i can't wait for more!
nictoria19 chapter 24 . 4/18
I just found your story and love it! The idea of a twin flame, Bella realizing how controlling Edward is and Charlie being more involved... perfect. I hope your muse and desire for your story returns.
Hedwigwhite chapter 24 . 3/27
Please update soon!
Guest chapter 24 . 2/25
This is amazing! Hope all is well.
SehunsBae37 chapter 24 . 1/18
Please tell me you will continue this story eventually, Nikki. I really love it and want to know what happens next. I would love to see Bella sneak away from Edward and Alice and make it back to Jacob and tell him what happens. Please update this story when you can.

-SB37
June chapter 24 . 1/18
This story is so great! Please update it soon. I need to know what happens next!
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