| Reviews for Written in the Sand |
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   StoneTheLoner chapter 11 . 7/20 I feel like you've forced all the Jedi into a certain mold so you can bash them. With the way the first chapter was Bashing! should be included in the summary so people know what they're getting into. It would be more representative of the real story then anything in the summary right now. |
| StoneTheLoner chapter 6 . 7/20 I'm certain now. This is absolutely not the story advertised. Is this a fanfiction version of clickbait? |
| StoneTheLoner chapter 5 . 7/20 Now I'm really starting to question the summary. As far as I can tell this will no longer be a slave rebellion story. It doesn't deserve to be up there anymore. Hell, it most likely never did. Most of the slave rebellion happened off screen and the rest only took up half a chapter. You're advertising a story you never intended to give. |
| StoneTheLoner chapter 3 . 7/20 Wtf? I don't buy for a second his mother knew all along but nobody ever clued Anakin in. |
| StoneTheLoner chapter 2 . 7/20 Would've been better if he'd joined the rebellion during the time skip so we had a somewhat mysterious character to learn about. Easier too. You could get away with him being more skilled since you don't have to show the training as a slow progression. |
| StoneTheLoner chapter 1 . 7/20 Why didn't Obi-Wan just leave? That honestly seemed like what he planned to do. To change his mind because Yoda shouted at him is kind of p*thetic. |
| nw150 chapter 15 . 7/9 hi I just caught up on the story. and all I can say is wow! More please! :D |
| RyantheSamurai chapter 15 . 7/2 Good chapter with palpy slowly gaining more power and reach, the lore for tatooine, and the characters. However a slight error is that dooku was the only one to beat mace in a duel when he was still a Jedi. I think mace might have created vaapad after, but it's not much of a problem. |
| RyanSquad chapter 15 . 7/2 I honestly hope Anakin doesn't turn again; Anakin turning into Vader is already known at this point. XD |
| MalirBly chapter 15 . 7/2 Great Chapter, Kitster is kidnapped that is not good, I can't wait for your next update! MalirBly |
| Juxshoa chapter 15 . 7/1 I hope Kitster makes it out of this... |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/27 Ze |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/27 Cu |
| RyantheSamurai chapter 14 . 6/18 Great chapter. The characters are also very accurate, as is the outcome of the battle. However you NEED to change the clone battalion under Skywalker back to the 501st unless you plan on him switching to it later. The 501st and 212th were the best in the war as they were ment to be the posterboys alongside Anakin and Obi-wan. Sidious would defintly be assigning the 501st to Anakin as it was part of his plan to turn him into his future apprentice and I don't think anyone can imagine the 501st without Anakin or without Rex. |
| Idk chapter 14 . 6/14 I really liked it! |
