I got confused when reading. Did you state that Natsu and Hibiki were together?

One inconsistency here. You stated in this chapter that Evergreen stayed in Fiore but last chapter you had her in the vehicle with Freed and Bixy.

I'm sooo excited! They're finally going to rescue everyone, I can't wait to see what happens next. You're a really awesome author Desna, keep up the amazing work.

I feel so bad for Yukino since she never deserved this :(

hehehe natsu with polka dot hair woul be a funny story maybe lucy getting revenge on him for burning her clothes on a mission. then her and vander tie him down to a chair and dye his hair with a glitter /blue/ green mixture. love your stories denesa keep it up and dont listen to those bullies. they can take their nalu pairing and shove it. based off the way he and happy treats her in the anime he really is a abusive but head

I loved this story years ago before you began to rewrite it! Rereading this now, i still love it! You are such a talented writer. I love reading you stories!

Wait a minute, which character did you remove? It's been a while since I read the original, and it just doesnt come to mind. So obviously your re write is brilliantly done that I dont even realise you dropped a character, and a powerful one? Hmmmm I'm gonna have to think on this

I just cant get over it! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! I remember the original version and I gotta say I'm enjoying the changes made like christoff/cana and hestor/farron. Not just the changes to the pairings but even changes to actions/reactions to situations are enjoyable. I'm truly sorry you lost the original desna, but I'm loving the changes you have made! Please keep it up! Cant wait for the rest of the story!

Que interesante capitulo, por fa muestra la fuerza de lucy para recuperar y defender lo que quiere, esa que impulsa a todos a seguir adelante

I’m so sorry to hear that people have been hassling you, I love the story so far!

don't let the bullshitters shit get to you you're doing a great job it's a great story!

Good freakin lord Desna. I seriously love this story, and you are killing me with cliffhangers. I cant wait for future updates to see where this story goes. I am very much enjoying your rewrite, it all fits together great. I sometimes wish that you could just get a chapter out everyday, but then i realize if you did, the chapter would not be as good as it is when you take your time. I hope your muses keep cooperating with you! Thank you!

I love the redo! SSSOOOOOOOO much more details. So good. I reading the original but this is BETTER! Can't wait for the next chapter.

I’m so excited to see Lucy and co whoop some ass! Great job!

This chapter was just amazing! I love all the characters behavior btw, the story line is amazing and suspense filled. Keep up the fantastic work, can't wait for the next update ️