nice story mate. the blonde spidey was such a good guy and he got killed off. ur story makes me feel better about it.

This hurt. It's probably silly but this scene really got to me. 8..( I fell in love with Peter Parker in those few minutes and felt his loss deeply as if he'd been there the whole time. I can't explain it. So yeah, this hurt but thank you for sharing it anyway.

Well put together, fun to see a Spiderman’s train of thought when he wanted a protegé!

Oof this hurt knowing what happenes next. Great story! Loved it!

Loved this, it really captures Peter Parker's character despite how brief we got to know him in Spiderverse. I really enjoyed how you delved into his personal POV and feelings during this scene. It makes the fact he dies so soon after, all the more heart breaking.

Great job!

That was really well done! I enjoyed reading it. Have you considered doing something similar from Peter B.'s perspective? Your writing style is perfect for this.

OH GOD reading that just makes me sad!
A legacy he himself couldn't raise, but one that his other self could.
I think I'm gonna go cry in a corner somewhere.

You write good. Keep it up!