Reviews for Dumb It Down
supergirl971 chapter 1 . 6/7
Cette histoire me console un peu par rapport à la fin de la saison 4. J’ai encore du mal à m’en remettre, alors merci
Grykon chapter 1 . 12/3/2019
Awww...Love it! I sure hope you are working on a new story for us!
natters chapter 1 . 10/11/2019
Good fic
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2019
I loved it, it was so Walter.
It is good to recognize that the fault was shared, even among the entire team, not only between Paige and Walter.
Bicii chapter 1 . 6/15/2019
Happy to be back and began with a fluff! I love that Walter was not really engaging with them and keeping his distance. It’s so true to the character.
Heading to the next story ;)
musiqueismyjam1041 chapter 1 . 3/19/2019
That was so cute
MetalKyria chapter 1 . 3/19/2019
Omg ,so sweet , Just what we needed..
Thank you so much.
dS-Tiff chapter 1 . 3/16/2019
Oh, this is so good! I love how you have Walter basically shutting down his emotions after the break up, because that would be the logical/efficient thing to do. It's exactly how he might react. Sometimes it seems that Paige gets most of the blame for what happened so I love that you have them acknowledge that they share the blame and they both made mistakes. (Also, I love that they did it on the couch... twice!)
heleenscorpion chapter 1 . 3/16/2019
ooooh yes beautiful,beautiful story. Made my day, thanks so much
marti chapter 1 . 3/16/2019
One word, GREAT!
WeBuiltThePyramids chapter 1 . 3/16/2019
Okay first off WHY did it take this fic for it to fully hit me that their "our relationship will destroy scorpion" fear came true? JESUS FORKING CHRIST. That hurts.

I love how Walter was so seemingly indifferent to her basically performing mating rituals right in front of him. Part of me thought that he was acting that way on purpose because he knew it would bother her. xD I may have to write that now. Then she shows back up like I'M IN LOVE WITH YOU WHAT THE ACTUAL HELL it's so great. What you actually did was so painful and profound, though. He just was like okay, this is how my brain works, you told me I wasn't good for you so I shut my interest off. It's painful but it's also SO Walter.

I also love how Paige's lack of perfection is acknowledged here, but it's also pointed out how often she is okay with the way he is, and if he's allowed to mess up sometimes, so is she. That's something I think some of us do forget sometimes. (Granted, I think we're just trying to compensate for all the times the show acted like Walter was the only person who ever messed up, but still.)

And then I fucking LOVED the parallel to them doing it multiple times on the couch. Ugh have I said lately how much I love your writing?
Marie chapter 1 . 3/16/2019
Wouawo that was great sweet and romantic you do know hot to writte them nice job
Thank you
Northangerescapee chapter 1 . 3/16/2019
Thank you! That's nicely done… I love it when Paige realize she's to blame too in the break up. And the way Walter is trying to be more mature is adorable and heartbreaking… He must have feel so alone. Glad you fixed it...
Margaret Gautier chapter 1 . 3/15/2019
So sorry my previous review, accidentally got got sent - as I pushed post review. Paige needs some help with resolving her insecurities. They love each other, I hope they find happiness. I'm so into your "invasion". Keep your stori
Margaret Gautier chapter 1 . 3/15/2019
This was a nice story. Paige is ver insecure. Walter seems more mature than Paige.. Her insecri

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