| Reviews for The Red Eyed Queen |
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PikaMew1288 chapter 5 . 9/13 I was excited when you had me believe that she was going to be Serafall's Queen then confused and disappointed now that she may be Grayfia's Queen. What confuses me is that I don't recall her ever getting a set of Evil Pieces. Wasn't she a defector of the Old Satan Faction? I figured Politics was why she didn't have her own Peerage in Canon. Serafall makes sense in Canon as she was always on the Hunt for Real Magical Girls for her potential Peerage. |
PikaMew1288 chapter 4 . 9/13 Shouldn't the Evil Pieces be limited to the power of the King? Isn't that why we don't see Devil reincarnating beings much stronger than them in canon? I thought that is why Rias had to use all her pawns on Issei in Canon. It was because she was weak enough to have to use all her pawns on a Heavenly Dragon's Soul. An Ultimate Class Devil like Serafall would likely only need a single piece to Reincarnate Akane because Serafall has power in spades |
XenoLucifer chapter 1 . 9/7 Bruh, I thought by bleach and Naruto crossover you meant your OC might use kido or have a zanpakutou and since she has the sharingan she might use chakra like in Naruto. Not that the fallen and angels can use kido and quincy sht. hard pass lmao. |
deathgeonous chapter 12 . 5/12 Interesting fic here. And more unique then normal. I liked. Thanks for writing it, and bye for now. |
ragriz chapter 11 . 3/14 Right, i've been blitz reading your fics for the last few days and i wonder, why put grayfia on the main character page when as far as i see, she is not the main focus of the story. Also who is the pairing for the mc |
Morregen chapter 11 . 3/9 Good chapter! |
sakaewmatsui chapter 10 . 2/12 can't wait for the next chapter |
blau92 chapter 7 . 11/16/2019 this chapter was awesome, the lore is really well constructed, please keep up the good work! |
Readinglover3 chapter 7 . 11/14/2019 Great chapter! Fascinating to learn more about Akane's background and the lore of this story. Wonder how everything is going to turn out? I look forward to seeing how everything proceeds! Will Grayfia receive information about Akane's bloodline? Will she recruit Akane to her peerage? Who will be in Grayfia's peerage? Will it just be Akane? Will Rias be interested in recruiting Akane to Gremory? Will Akane join Serafall's peerage eventually? What will Akane do for Grayfia as part of her peerage? Will the two get along? How will Akane interact with Sona? We are seeing how she interacts with Rias and partly with Akeno, but if Akane is recruited into Serafall's peerage as her Queen, she will have to interact with Sona quite a bit more. What about the mysterious individual replicating the evil pieces? Akane is obviously being targeted by said individual, so what do they want with her? Who exactly will Akane be involved with? There are so many questions I look forward to see being answered! Good luck and I can't wait for the next chapter! |
sakaewmatsui chapter 7 . 11/10/2019 you know, for a second I thought that you stopped writing this story! man when I see the notification I'm hellla happy to see you're updating the story! anyway good chapter dude! it's interesting to see akane's family history |
sakaewmatsui chapter 6 . 10/18/2019 please make akane x grayfia as the main pair |
Iceborn Fenrir chapter 6 . 10/11/2019 Thanks for the chapters/updates. I’m really interested to see where this goes as well with Akane potentially joining Grayfia’s peerage as well as the shenanigans that may happen |
Mathias gabriel dracula chapter 1 . 10/11/2019 Please do Akane x Grayfia |
sona queen of ic chapter 5 . 10/1/2019 Please do the pair Akane and Grayfia |
Readinglover3 chapter 5 . 9/10/2019 Nice chapter. I don't think I've read a story of Grayfia having a peerage before. I've only read stories where Grayfia is mentioned as Sirzech's queen and wife. I look forward to seeing how Akane does with Grayfia and their interactions together. I also look forward to seeing how Akane and Serafall do with each other. Handling a major sis-con must be taxing. |