| Reviews for Khamsa |
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   Violet Rose in The Clouds chapter 2 . 8/3/2019 It's a good story so far, but in my opinion, Mutsumi'a monologue at the end of chapter 1 is a bit too telly. Instead of having her straight up declare her intentions and reveal the motivation for her going to the past to confront her mother and aunts, have her simply say "I'll fix this, mom and dad" or something similar along those lines and then slowly reveal what happened in the future over several chapters. Have Mutsumi bring up memories of her dad and her mom and aunts arguing, but don't bring up any of the quintuplets' names so as to avoid giving the truth away too early. But that's just my five cents. Since this seems to be one of the best fanfics for this manga on the site, I'll be following this story and await for new chapters with bated breath. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/28/2019 :) Kinshaka |
| JBE.97 chapter 2 . 6/7/2019 Please update! |
| cobalt64 chapter 2 . 5/10/2019 again,great work,cant wait for the next chapter |
| cobalt64 chapter 1 . 5/9/2019 great |
| Donosi chapter 2 . 5/4/2019 Enjoyable second chapter. Was expecting for their to be an eatsuki joke when they were looking at the album, like a picture of her with a tower of food xd. |
| Toshiro Ricky chapter 2 . 5/2/2019 Creating paradox to change the timeline? But love is destiny or fate, you can't change it even by alternate the story or even by quantum theory. WHAT IAM TALKING ABOUT? LOL! I like it where this will going, you keep steady for plot story. Nice. Thanks for the chapter, hope for another update. |
| FanFictionHunter chapter 2 . 5/2/2019 SO FREAKIN CUTE! |
| OkabeRintarou chapter 2 . 5/2/2019 Mutsumi came back in time via the Quantum Realm (hence the white dress), so that she could get the reality stone, and re-arrange the events of the marriage of her father to one of the quints and make it that her mom "wins". XD |
| cobalt64 chapter 2 . 5/2/2019 nice,one of the best fic here |
| smus2001 chapter 1 . 4/30/2019 nice... very indulging and the way secrecy was maintained was absolutely clever... |
| Zasshu Fuhahahahaha chapter 1 . 4/28/2019 So this is inspired by Yomeiro choice huh? Interesting. It would be more interesting if this also goes the Yomeiro route where his other daughters from other girls also time travels and everyone just got attached and doesn't want any of the daughters to disappear they went the harem route. |
| FanFictionHunter chapter 1 . 4/26/2019 So, wait. Your a Yotsuba supporter while bringing in a daughter you plan to have ruin her chances? |
| Toshiro Ricky chapter 1 . 4/8/2019 Oh shot... don't tell me she is... that liar Nakano daugher. |
| shuujin.takagi chapter 1 . 4/7/2019 El primer fic que leo de este manga y me gusta, espero que actualices pronto |
