Reviews for Darker than Grey |
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![]() ![]() Such a great story. I hope you can update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Next chapter, please! |
![]() ![]() This story is amazing! I would love to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why does she take everything Jack says as gospel? She is a smart business woman and has a mind of her own. It makes her look niave and totally controlled by Jack. When she was listening to Christian's story she hit the nail on the head questioning whether Jack had been a phedophile with her at 15. Now he's trying to fill her head with nonsense about her not being able to love when she clearly had already experienced lovemaking with Christian and enjoyed it. So she should know Jack is full of shit. I hope she sticks to her guns as Christian did with Ana (in the canon) when Elena was trying to get in his head. I hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! She is so blind and apparently deaf! I mean Christian described Elena and Jack’s exactly the same. Maybe she will catch on soon. Great Story so fa! |
![]() ![]() "I have to admit that making love with Christian was a whole new experience she didn't want to let go of." You've shifted pronouns from first person (I) to third person (she), which makes reading this awkward. |
![]() ![]() Oh my goodness Grace walking into Christain's house and having blueberry pancakes. I hope Ana gives Christain a try and let him he both her dom and her lover. I hope she tells Jack to back off. Thank you can't wait for more |
![]() ![]() I love this story, is great! I hope that you updated more often, please. |
![]() ![]() Please Ana don't listen to Jack. Give yourself a chance. Great update. Thank u for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really dislike Jack, Elena, and the harsher form of BDSM, so I almost passed on this story. Needless to say, you have me hooked and wanting to see how Christian will help Ana discover true love and romance. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoying this story. Thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow how we let ourselves be manipulated into thinking we need are abuser input in life and relationships. It's so easy for people to find the lonely and the weak to be manipulated. I hope Christian helps Ana the way he in the stage of his life that past what a controlling and toxic person cane to his life as her 2. Thank you for updating please stay safe |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon️ I love this bookand maybe longer chapters please |