Knew it! What with the hint of Maria gaining weight. Plus I was wondering when it would happen since their "activities" were quite regular.

That was amazing! Such a mixture of emotions I am left with though. Thank you for writing this.

Wow Raith became clan leader and Ya'stih is his name cool.

Wow the baby is born.
But poor Raith he lost his love.
Where will they go?

Forgot to add one thing. Since Ana is officially deceased, I must give my sad speech.
Ana, friend of Maria and Za'taan, ooman lover of Raith, you will never be forgotten. Your love and sacrifice for your love ones is one of courage and heart. Your wisdom will encourage Raith to be a great clan leader and bring peace between humans and Yautjas. R.I.P. dear Ana.

2-in-1, best chapters and best story ever. I'm glad it ended in a good way. As for Za'taan and Maria's son Ya'stih, his future will be glorious. I wonder if there's going to be a story involving Ya'stih? Hmmmm...

As the sequel story, I agree that iTunes are a pain when comes to foreign music. Shame I'm a late bloomer to the 21st Century because I don't have iTunes. I whether buy CDs and listen to music on certain stations like YouTube and stuff. I'm old fashion and born in 1988.
Here the next 2 songs for the sequel... Both are country songs:
3. Life Turned Her That Way by Ricky Van Shelton. A beautiful song and more on a woman's touch. This song will touch even most tense female Yautja like Flying Arrow.
4. I Cross My Heart by George Strait. One of my favorite song and singer. This one is where Ethan and Flying Arrow will becomes lifemates in the eyes of Arrow Clan, Iron Fist Clan and Razor Clan. But that's almost towards the end and there's more to that story.
3 more songs left and you can add a bonus song. Think of a good bonus song.

Have a good break and come back stronger and hungrier.

Please make a happy ending

Oh no not Anaand poor Raith, he doesn't seem to have much luck with women.

But keep up the good work though, love this story so much xx

Got internet but has limits.
No Ana why at least she died a hero.
Poor Raith he is going to be heartbroken.

Another good, but why, chapter. So Walter was David the whole time. I never like the Aliens prequel film Prometheus. Awful storyline. I hope David dies in this and Maria's baby survives. But why kill off Ana? *sad face* Please tell me it isn't true.

I like the idea of Ethan and Flying Arrow dancing together. Two minds think alike. In fact, one of the 5 songs is their dance song which would lead to their first love scene together. The song, "Down by the Salley Gardens", is their dance song. Their 2nd love scene will involve the song "Someday".
As for the songs for the sequel story (keep it noted), I am revealing the first 2 songs. The 2 songs are heard in anime series and movies.
1. "Zutto Kitto" by Aya Hirano. Used in the 1st anime movie of the anime/manga Fairy Tail. In fact, the singer is the voice of one of the main characters, Lucy. Very beautiful song. Fairy Tail is one of my favorite series. I suggest you listen to the song on YouTube.
2. "Somewhere, Faraway, Everyone is Listening to a Ballad" by Ryohei Yamagishi. Used in the end credits of 90s anime film, Ninja Scroll. Very pretty song. Might be used in another dance scene in the sequel. Listen to it in YouTube.

Continue on the Hunt.

And still more shocks come roaring out of the blue!

Hey just me again anyway i don't use Instagram so i can't put it there but anyway there is a way to create your own emoji just type in your search engine create your own emoji one way or another?

Sorry my last post was on phone and it changed Tane to Game.

Wow Game is dead she only wanted freedom not death. Now Weyland is dead but who is Walter?

Is Walter the one who killed Raith's mother.
Won't be able to read the next one I am going on a cruise and I don't know the Wi-Fi yet I might also try and take a break from the internet to enjoy cruise.

Good luck on next chapter.

Little FYI, it's chapter 22 on Sunday. You put ch. 23. Not blaming.