I really like the concept for the story. It’s interesting. Everything is well written and the chapters keep me wanting more. Keep up the great work. Looking forward to the next chapter!

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Natsu stared at Makarov, at loss of words, trying to find a way to justify his actions. He then looked down "He stole a dragon's magic. He had no right to. Becoming a dragon slayer like that is wrong. He's considered evil for doing so. He's betraying the dragons" he voiced quietly, but loud enough for the people surrounding them to hear him. Makarov frowned and thought about how Natsu was raised by an actual dragon "Natsu, I understand that you were taught and raised by the dragon's principals. But what you did was wrong and wanting to hurt someone for that is even worse. You have to understand that it wasn't his choice to have a lacrima implanted in him. His father forced that on him. He didn't get a say in the matter." Natsu's eyes grew wide in shock, he tilted his head towards Laxus, guilt filling his mind and expression. He looked down ashamed "I'm so sorry. I didn't know. I'm really sorry. I just jumped to conclusions." He gritted his teeth and his eyes met with Laxus'. It's true that he was forced to have this lacrima but he hadn't realized it was a traitorous act to have one inside of him. He scratched the back of his head and sighed "It's fine. Nobody got really hurt and I guess I should've explained too. Just forget it, alright?" he said as he approached and looked at the boy, who was clearly sorry for his actions. Natsu looked up, happy that he was being forgiven, but not entirely since he still felt the guilt. "No, I still shouldn't have attacked you without reason. So I'm sorry." His onyx eyes meeting Laxus's, the older boy smiled "It alright I told you. And plus, you're not the only one to be at fault. And plus, you're not half bad, even if it wasn't a real fight." Laxus and Natsu then both went to the infirmary, tending to their minor injuries.

So you spend 4 chapters making it as if Natsu turned dark and ruthless but when he meet people he didn't spend much time with them and that mocked him cuz he said that he was raised by a Dragon, he goes nervous cowardly and submissive? Like seriously bro Natsu is supposed to be dark and op but act like the same dumbass he is in canon. . he don't need to explain himself to anybody Ignia would be ashamed of the failure that Natsu turned out to be after those 7 years. .

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Ooh that is pretty interesting story of Natsu meeting Ignia the Fire God Dragon and biological son of Igneel and the pink haired Fire Dragon Slayer is being trained by his big foster brother to be strong enough to kill the Black Dragon of the Apocalypse, Acnologia. Although Ignia does not really care about Igneel since he never really knew his father after being born, he really wants Natsu to be stronger like him as Big Brother Figure and taught him Fire God Dragon Slayer Magic. Igneel, who is inhabiting Natsu's body to prevent Dragonification, would feel ashamed that he was not there for his biological child to guide and nurture him like he did with Natsu. At least Ignia seem to grow to care for his foster brother even if he does not want to admit it after spending years training and teaching Natsu his Magic.

Of course this cause alarm and worry for Makarov, Gildarts and Erza and her friends in Fairy Tail that Natsu has changed upon reuniting with them 7 years later and believed he has gone to the dark side for they intend to bring him back into the path of light. August the Magic King would call the concept of light is justice and darkness is evil pretty shallow that I recall when he deconstructed Crime Sorcerie's beliefs after onesidedly defeating them.

I wonder if Ignia knows Natsu is END or not especially when he is sealed and the book is held by Mard Geer, de facto leader of Tartaros. Then again he seems aware that Natsu will soon become the destroyer of all which is END, combining Etherious and Dragon powers into one fused entity of extremely potent power that has the potential to defeat AND kill Acnologia and Zeref just as the Black Wizard intended Natsu to do.

By the way, the killing of Dark Mages is not forbidden. It is just a moral rule that Fairy Tail Mages have and other Legal Guilds follow to emulate them in moral high ground. There have been plenty of times Legal Mages have killed people from Dark Guilds without punishment. For example Erza killing Ikaruga, Laxus killing Wahl Icht, Minerva killing Kyoka. So Natsu would legally be able to kill Dark Mages without repercussion. And it is good to see that Natsu is willing to kill and also knows when to draw the line. Because it is kinda irritating of the ridiculous no killing rule that simply allows villains get away with their crimes scott free and being unrepentant shameless monsters that knows the goody two shoes won't even dare bloody their hands to put an end to them permanently.

I have an idea about the Fourth Generation Dragon Slayers I would like to share. What if instead of the Quartum Army made of expendable Berserker Lancelot-like homunculi clones implanted with Dragon Lacrima, how about genetically engineered super soldiers with Dragon Lacrima and Dragon DNA on their bodies?

Since Zeref's main goal to fight and kill Acnologia, the Fourth Generation would be made as a Super Soldier project where Alvarez' most brilliant scientists and genetic engineers, both human and Machias, with Irene as head of the project and creator of Dragon Slayer Magic would create the stable unified beings of human and Dragon power and with enough extensively harsh military training and combat experience to deal with powerful beasts and renegade Mages and defiant regions that opposed Alvarez, the Fourth Generation would be strong enough to give the First, Second and Third Generations a run for their money and be contender with the Fifth Generation from Giltena.

If Ishgar has the First, Second and Third Generation while Giltena has the Fifth Generation, then Alakitasia will have the Fourth Generation.

Of course the process of becoming Fourth Generation is not easy due to how much extensive surgeries it would take to infuse the human body's muscles, organs and bones, be it male and female, with Dragon DNA extracted from deceased Alakitasian Dragon bones found and excavated on Alvarez along with a Dragon Lacrima to stabilize them without mutating into Dragons and losing their humanity, and only 50 out of 100 in each chosen batch in the Alvarez military survived the process so it would be a small but effective force of Fourth Generation Dragon Slayers.

What do you think?

I'm surprised that there are Dragons still around other than the Five God Dragons and there is a safe haven for them in Giltena away from Acnologia and the outside world in Earth Land especially Diabolos the Guild of 5th Generation Dragon Slayers or Dragon Eaters. There is no doubt that the Dragons are rebuilding their civilization after losing everything 400 years ago that knocked them off from their high pedestals and humbled them to an extent after fleeing to Giltena. Especially that the Dragons are willing to take human forms albeit with Dragonic traits and features and walk a mile in humans' shoes. And Natsu was tasked in finding any Dragon and bring them home to the Dragon Safe Haven.

Would it be cool if Caramille, Mercuphobia's assistant, learns Water Dragon Slayer Magic and Water God Slayer Magic? It could be interesting to see Natsu and Caramille interact as fellow God Dragon Slayers despite their polar and elemental opposites, and representatives of their respective God Dragons in Giltena.

I am looking forward to see Diabolos' appearance soon. Especially when Natsu would probably have a long brutal and colorful history with them during his time at Giltena. If Natsu was upset at the idea of Second Generation being Dragon Slayers who gain power by lacrima of Dragon powers before, then he will be ABSOLUTELY LIVID at the Dragon Eaters gaining power and getting stronger by devouring the flesh of Dragons they hunt and slay after learning several or dozen Dragons were killed and eaten by Diabolos who intends to do the same on the Five God Dragons. Natsu won't let them touch his big foster brother and get away with it. That also includes Caramille as the Water Dragon Slayer defending Mercuphobia from the Dragon Eaters with her life.

I have a feeling Natsu would be a major pain in the ass or a real challenge for Kyria, Madmorl and Skullion Raider and Georg Reisen the Guild Master of Diabolos too as well in multiple clashes and skirmishes in the adoptive son of Igneel's mission to protect the Five God Dragons or most importantly the Dragon Haven from the Dragon Eaters whatever it takes.

Speaking of the Second Generation, guess it is safe to say that Natsu won't probably like God Serena the Eight Elemental Dragon Slayer who is known as Hybrid Theory, man loved by the Dragon Gods which I can tell Natsu would be offended by such claim as he was trained by Ignia the Fire God Dragon. Especially with God Serena arrogantly boasting all Dragons, be they king or god, will crumble before him and his immeasurable might.

However, God Serena shares the same desire to find and kill Acnologia as he revealed his reason of defecting to the Alvarez Empire before the Black Dragon in human form killed him in one blow and not even letting him finish or attack immediately. Perhaps Natsu would set aside his hatred for Second Generation for it is the lesser evil compared to the Fifth Generation and snag God Serena to join him in his quest to kill Acnologia. Natsu would even offer God Serena to be trained by the Five God Dragons, who would want him on their side against the Black Dragon, and get even stronger to catch up with him which I know God Serena won't pass up the opportunity and willingly accepts the offer. I think Ignia would like this one and be willing to be the first to train the Hybrid Theory himself.

God Serena's potential as a character should not be wasted like Mashima did to him in the canon. It would be hilarious to see the dynamic banter between Natsu and God Serena in their bizarre adventures around the world. Especially when God Serena would advocate Natsu to be 5th ranked Wizard Saint or even boldly 4th rank to replace Warrod who is retiring anyway and happy that someone from Fairy Tail has surpassed his limits and has grown as a exemplary Mage.

I wonder how would you handle Elefseria in this story? He is the guy who issued the 100 Years Quest to defeat and seal away the Five God Dragons after all which 98 (including Gildarts who is the only one that survived and lived to tell the tale) groups of Mages have tried and failed to complete the job for a century. The Law Dragon would be quite a nuisance to the Five God Dragons, the Dragon Haven and Natsu in Giltena unless there is something done about it.

Anyways, this is a really promising story and I will be looking forward for the next chapter. Faved and Followed. :D

thats a big oof.

but ehh, good luck on your exams!

Please don’t end this story it’s so freaking gooodddd

Excellent update

Awesome, can't wait for updates!

I was really hoping to see more of Natsu’s Fire Dragon God Slayer magic. Guess I’ll have to wait for new chapters to see it for myself.

Good story mate. I'm glad that ya dropped the whole harem thing as I find it stupid and cliché. As I now look forward to future updates. Keep up the great work.

That Natsu can be transformed into dragon as Acnologia

Mirajane x natsu is the best

I like the idea of NatsuxOC maybe that girl from the previous chapter. Still great story and can't wait to see what happens in the next one.

Please no NaLu there are too many of them as it is. If anything make it a NaZa or a NaMi fix since he interacted with them first or at least with Erza. Still great story by the way hope you update soon.